We really like the triangle element glyphs being used in the lettering. The parenthesis should only encompass the (om) We like the circular feel. Maybe make the circle a watermark of a vintage sundial. I love the triangles suggesting arrows in #10. Don't love the font, but love the inclusion of the symbols in the lettering. We feel more and more drawn to the idea of having the letters created using symbols. i.e using feathers to create one letter, maybe paddles for another, a dream catcher, mountains, the sun... incorporating symbols that represent the elements in the lettering. I also want to emphasize more of a gypsy/bohemian feel.
I still like #10 and #11 the best. Maybe stick with more of that aesthetic. Dont like the font in the other two. I like a subtle but bohemian font. I really like 10 with perhaps more of the font idea of 11 and less harsh contrasts in the color scheme. Maybe play with the black and white. It could just be signified with lines, not a fill. Also think it would look cool to put roman numerals instead of dashes in the sundial since sundials signify time. I really like 10.