Also love a simplified vintage sundial feel. We feel more and more drawn to the idea of having the letters created using symbols. i.e using feathers to create one letter, maybe paddles for another, a dream catcher, mountains, the sun... incorporating symbols that represent the elements in the lettering. I also want to emphasize more of a gypsy/bohemian feel. We love the use of the paddles! But maybe they could be incorporated in to the SUP part more. Love the contrast on #9 lettering between nomad and yoga and SUP.
I like the paddles in 32. Also really cool way to incorporate the board in the "n" perhaps the sundial could be incorporated in the "o" still dont love the font. Would like and spelled out. Think about creating the letters using symbols... the "m" could be the paddles, the "a" maybe a teepee... kinda like the "n"
Hello and thank you for all your comments, they are all very helpful. Here are some new ideas #41, #42, #43, #44. I really can wait for your new comments and directions.
I really like 42 a lot. I dont like the sundial under the "n" because it feels too much. Maybe use the lighter shade of 42 and combine it with 41. I like that the feather parentheses kinda suggest a sun in 41. Soften everything a bit in rigidness and color darkness. I like the way you stacked "yoga and SUP" in 43. can the and be spelled out? Maybe have it vertical then yoga stacked on sup. Really enjoy the new submissions a lot
Entry 41 is our fave. Please spell out "and" rather than using the & symbol. Also I would like "yoga and sup" to be justified to the right as you did in #43. Could we have the word yoga stacked on top of the SUP with the word AND going vertical next to it?
I suggested to the other designers to incorporate it in the "o" I believe that means you can. I like the new variations a lot. Don't love the speckled effect in the "n" so much. I like 77 with the "and" in 78. I think any kind of bacground around the lettering will be hard to use in printing. I like how you made variations in the color scheme. I like the parentheses in 80, where they are darker than the arch around them. I think 80 with the lettering of yoga and sup in 77. And take out the waves underneath. I think that will make it look cleaner and more simplified. Thank you
in 92, I dont like the 3 dimensional effect of the sundial. I want to simplify it all over. Not loving the board under the "n" but do like it incorporated in the "d" but maybe make it more of a line drawing. Im being drawn back to 87. I like the font for "yoga and sup" and can I see it without the feather on top? Im really trying now to get something very simple but striking. Thank you for all of your submissions.
Are you interested in submitting more the above suggestions? I would love to see an even simpler design. Please let me know as I am in judging phase and would love to see your work with the above suggestions. I will re rank you #1 if you are interested in resubmitting some new designs.