The only thing I can think of to improve is the wave just a little. It looks good now.. Maybe you can change the shape of the ends of the inner lines to create more of a feel of the wave bowling towards us?
to me here we are looking at the back of the wave and it is UPSIDE down! I am a surfer my whole life, so waves are very important to me and them also looking real
see how this circled lower part of the wave you made wraps around the lotus flower so nice and feels normal? PLEASE PLEASE just do that but at the top AND BEHINF THE FLOWER! SO IT IS BEHIND IT coming over it! wrapping around it! PLEASE PLEASE !! Running out of time
if you make all the lines blue and just the yop 2 lines white it will really look like a wave. We just need to get it shaped different. THANKS and good luck
1) imagine this lower wave you have here turned inside out horizontally 2) Imagine it like a cupped closed hand shaped like a wave wrapping over and around a flower from behind, but NOT covering the flower. Thanks for your patients
understood. Thanks for getting back to me. I never forgot this logo, we just could not get on the same page. I am trying an idea now with another designer. I will move you in 1st very soon. Please imagine what I am talking about! If you can nail it I will pick you or at the very least pay you on the side for it. THANKS SO VERY MUCH for your patients
see the way you have the wave lines here on the bottom. They are bulging outward. A wave would have them going inward and away like a bowl. Do you understand?
I like this logo a lot and tried to get you to see my vision of the wave breaking behind and over the Lotus. Here the wave is upside down reversed so you see the back of it. Do you understand what I mean?
please take the bottom part of this one out, so lotus shows all the way. and make the top part of the lines shaped more like a cresting peaking wave coming at us. Thanks so much
hey we are on to something here! super cool! but you are not following our directions. Please take this AMAZING wave shape and FLIP IT SO IT IS A WAVE BREAKING BEHIND AND OVER THE LOTUS FLOWER please. This is an exciting logo. THANKS SO MUCH
getting tons of the same logo. Your are doing cool stuff, but it is the same thing everyone else is doing. We are a small little hotel on the beach people like to surf and do yoga and meditate. If you want try some different ideas. WE REALLY LOVE the font that has no cross in the "A"s. Thanks for asking. We are just making room, don't take anything personal, you are are strong designer and still very much in the contest. We are just starting to get the teams input, so please be patient. Thanks and have a great day.
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I'm not sure if they are what you want :)
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Thanks!
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