Thank you for your submission. I like where you have started here with the simplicity. If you can look at a few of the others(Entry #4 & 5) I really like how they have a "wing" as part of the "9".
I also like having the "nine skies" spelled out so good job on that. If you are going to make a revision and add wings or something to the "9" we may want it to look a little more like a standard 9 instead of a cursive 9 that could be conceived as something else.