Niagara NationalsLogo Design Contest

more simple, dynamic and bold.
what do you thing? any suggestion?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

I made some change on entry #82
please check it out.

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please check your request on entry #38

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

revision
1. remove the word "elite"
2. colour the wording
3. fix the bottom white outlines to be more straight
am I in right direction?
any other suggestion?

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

thanks for your feedback,
let me clear the direction at the point 3, can you use mark tool in logo tournament the give more clear direction...

B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo

hi mbahdjoyo, i like your logo. I have a couple of ideas i would like to see, i am not sure it will make better but i kind of want to see what it would look like just to make sure.
1. Can you remove the word "elite"
2. Can you colour the wording in maybe Blue or something?
3. Can you fix the bottom white outlines to be more straight or less jaggety?

Hi
Scott-barneshockey
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision,

B 1st rd, mbahdjoyo