Ok, good — we're close! Glad you're really getting the fine balance. I might try nudging the generation and tweaking things here and there, just slightly, to get what you're after. Worth taking a look I think so you can compare this one, which is looking pretty tight, and a new one.
Down to the end, having tough time, probably means any one would work?? Like this larger generation but miss the word not left justified, and when roof is pushed up logo feels too tall and doesn't have space around it like u suggested.
2 options. - make Generation bigger in available space OR make Generation full width of Garage, lift roof above Next Generation.
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Just to expand on that. As you can see how delicate the balance is in the message of the 3 words in the logo, if another thing is added close underneath it will become a lot to take in, in a glance. On the road a person really only has a couple seconds to read something.
I would address that on a case-by-case basis. Not attach it directly to the logo as a fixed thing.
I'd prefer to keep a certain amount of space around the logo so it doesn't get cluttered. So on vehicles for example, logo then space then phone/web.
The actual description might run along a different spot on the truck.
The gradient matches the other rood — it pretty much is shiny gray now is it not?
Too much small detail is going to get lost on things like caps or uniforms – they really need to be strong shapes.
Can we steal away from Garages some size to make Next Generation a little bigger. I like Garages the first focus with next 2nd thing u see, and generation the last thing but it seems too small. I also like the roof graphic at it's current pitch. ???
Thank you Gary, glad to hear. Night time here so I will talk to you tomorrow.
Best to put personal details in a private message after winner is decided (just so you know, these comments on logos become public).
Thank you Michael it's a beautiful logo. I will need some additional work ie billboard layouts, graphic alone on front of baseball hat etc. Look forward to working with you. It is best to communicate with me via my cell Gary Rush 661 444 0662 out of California. I will finalize soon just want to get final input from friends.
Yes, I can supply all three versions. Blue and black background versions would need to be supplied via email after end of co test. Logotournament only allows for one version (jpeg and eps) to be sent via this website at end of contest. No problems at all to do the extra colour types.
I can show you a version with next larger, yes just slightly
Yes, I can supply all theee versions. Blue and black background versions would need to be supplied via email after end of co test. Logotourbament only allows for one version (jpeg and eps) to be sent at end of contest. No problems at all to do the extra colour types.
Hard to see in this small image but the Garages has a silver-grey border which gives it a premium look.
If used on a cap the design would be simplified to flat colors for embroidery.
With the extreme perspective applied to the shapes it implies forward movement, dynamic and modern. Implying high-tech design and speed and efficiency of installation.
Any more development since u have seen the other entries? Wondering how your art work could represent company, say on a baseball hat, without the company name?
I have some development to do this n this to take it to another level. Just to keep you posted, updates in next half day.
Thanks for the update - Garages more prominent will help balance things.
Update! I'm signing off till tomorrow (late into the night here in Australia). Just in case you had any feedback. I'll look forward to discussing further.
Yeah, let's ditch the two shapes. Just so you know the idea behind this. They represented two spotlights from the sky. Removing one works even better as it's an eye catching diagonal on new ones.
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If they remember the name that's the main thing.
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I'd prefer to keep a certain amount of space around the logo so it doesn't get cluttered. So on vehicles for example, logo then space then phone/web.
The actual description might run along a different spot on the truck.
Does that make sense?
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Too much small detail is going to get lost on things like caps or uniforms – they really need to be strong shapes.
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Moving 'generation' — it also adds a sense of forward motion/speed – moving into the "next generation".
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Best to put personal details in a private message after winner is decided (just so you know, these comments on logos become public).
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I run a graphic design business here.
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In this one "generation" is a fraction less bold than version #648 — making "Next" just slightly more prominent
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Yes, I can supply all theee versions. Blue and black background versions would need to be supplied via email after end of co test. Logotourbament only allows for one version (jpeg and eps) to be sent at end of contest. No problems at all to do the extra colour types.
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I guess the other design is a little less practical in that it's so horizontal, like a formula one car.
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I can place the text underneath and make it larger but that will change the dynamic of how the roof is launching out of the text.
I'll upload a couple of variations for you to see.
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Richer blue is looking sharper. Uploading in a minute.
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I'm fully aware not to infringe on any other designs.
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If used on a cap the design would be simplified to flat colors for embroidery.
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Thanks for the update - Garages more prominent will help balance things.
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