Thanks for your designs. While I think #2 is really cool, I think the mark takes up too much space and attention compared to the name. I think I prefer #1. Also, would like see Newsday in all caps, and Communications larger. And, if you can fit the tagline into design #1, I would like to see that too..."Engaging audiences. Amplifying brands." Finally, can you try a couple of different color combinations. I think the green might be a little too overpowering. Or maybe the Newsday can be in blue, while keeping the mark the same colors?
If you don't mind, would like to see #28 in blue and red (maybe a cranberry red?), but would like a font change so there's more spacing between letters. You can see in designs 32,45, and 55 that Communications is easier to read in those fonts. In addition, would like to see what "communications" looks like as same length as tagline. This will allow for communications to be larger. Maybe this idea of extending both communications and tagline would work better with #39, since the mark doesn't hang as low?
In addition, would like to see same as described above with Newsday all in blue, a red and blue mark, and communications in red.
1. Can you apply blue and orange colors of entry #40 to entry #56? 2. I would also like to see the mark in the top center of your latest design, also in blue and orange. 3. If I didn't give you any direction on colors, please give me an example of which color combination you would choose as a designer.
oh...and one more please. Would like to see your original green and blue colors. NEWS in Blue. DAY in green. COMMUNICATIONS in grey. Tagline in blue? Thanks!!
Hey there Ray...thanks. Maybe wasn't clear. Wanted to see #82 in colors of #81 (green and blue) Also would like to see #81 with the mark on the top center (like in #40) ... would like to see this one in both blue and orange, and in blue and green. Thanks!
Ray, would still like to see #83 with the mark on top. Also, for #82 and #83, can you make the dots go lighter to darker as they extend outward. I think this will imply "amplification" a bit better. Thanks!
Ray, hopefully last set of changes until we get to final 5! My boss like the colors of entry 136. Can you please try those colors. ALSO, he likes the original larger size of the mark. Can you go back to the large mark but use your most current font? Also, would like tagline in upper case letters. Lower case in blue not as readable as some of the other entries that are in upper case. Your entry #28 tagline would probably work. Thanks!