New Zealand Dream WeddingsLogo Design Contest

Liking entry #19

can you please try the following changes:
- make the pink the same colour number as in your entry 8 (although keep the fade on the heart)
- stylise the I D rather that the serif font currently there.
- make the middle Chinese character about 2/3 the size it currently is but keep the same spacing and centre the text alignment.
- please make sure the 'NEW ZEALAND DREAM WEDDINGS' has enough density to hold up when placed over images as a watermark or against other background colours.
- my partner would like to see a wedding dress incorporated into the logo (as per this mornings update) can you consider options for getting a dress into the logo, maybe within an enlarged letter D?

Thanks...

OK, I will do
thank you

Hi, we still like your ones best. Can you please see if you could do 2 changes:

1. Make the Chinese characters inside the heart as big as that in your entry #19. We wanted only the MIDDLE character slightly smaller than the ones on both sides of it.

2. Adapt and use the bridal sketch in the second attachment (which we added to to our brief the other day) as the background girl figure please. About the same grey toned you are using in #22

Thanks a lot!

OK, ASAP

Thanks,

PS: Just realised that the middle Chinese character is actually incorrect as it's missing an apostrophe at the top. we'll send you a corrected version soon with the middle character in the right proportion we'd want. Thanks a lot.

Hi again, we've uploaded another file which contains the Chinese characters. Can you please try both the horizontal and vertical versions.

Also, please replace the figure with the bridal sketch in the second file.

Thanks a lot!

about figure your bridal sketch, I'm affraid to approach, because you does not own the copyright !

can I make the sketch with mine ?

Hi Yosaiki

#94 is our favourite, we are nearly there...a few more tweaks we'll have the winning entry. Can you please:

1. Enlarge the heart so it looks VISUALLY the same size as the letters "I" and "D".

2. We like the vertical Chinese but it's too hard to read, it's blurry. Can you please make the Chinese characters bigger and clearer.

3. Please adjust the spacing between the letter "D" and the heart so it looks like the sentence "I DO", rather than "I D O".

4. Move the vertical line in the middle so it looks VISUALLY centred, but is actually slightly to the left of centre.

Thanks for your hard work. We really appreciate it.

Craig and Cindi

OK, Thanks

Changes all good, but we still need that vertical line in the centre to separate the logo in the middle.

Please do not remove that line. We wanted the line to be moved slightly to the left...remember just a tiny little bit.

Thanks a lot :)

Hi Yosaiki

We have had a 'final' decision from the logo tournament people about your reworking of the figure in our New Zealand Dream Weddings logo and they are unhappy about how close it is to the original image we posted.

Therefore in order to sort out the logo we need you to make the image of the girl much more your own version rather than just a trace of the original.

If we could sort this out as soon as possible so we can get you paid and we can start using our logo it'd be appreciated.

OK Craig, I've done #118

Hi Yosaiki
having looked at your revision it is a good start but can you please
- take the hem out so vertical pleats fade out unevenly to create a dreamier effect
- the whole sketch needs to be longer and leaner - can you maybe stretch the whole drawing vertically a bit or pull her up so the waist is above the D and the skirt is stretched so that it fades out where the current skirt ends
- the girls arm is to long and misshapen can you rework it please
- make it a bit more modern, stylised and simple
so could you please give us 2 or 3 additional sketch options around these changes

OK, bu tOnly the 1st ranked designer will be able to submit entries.
Thanks,

Hi
thanks for the hard work, we like #120

can you:
- get rid of the girls right arm and shoulder, just leave a small area of white space at the bottom of her neck so that she looks more side on rather than front on
- curve the outside line of the skirt between the I and the D outward rather than inward and add another line also curing outward to indicate a wedding train or veil because at the moment the bottom of the skirt looks to symmetrical like cats whiskers
- can you do something about the girls head so she doesn't look like she is wearing a cowboy hat

Thanks

OK !