I like the professional look of #15 I would maybe like a little more substance and I would rather have it say resturant hood cleaning and pressure washing. I will change my post to reflect this sorry for the confusion. Thanks
Thanks for the feedback and rank. I submitted five more versions of the concept you liked (#20, #21, #22, #23 and #24). Made it more complex and professional. Also changed the tag line which worked spot on. The initial slogan was a bit too long.