Raymer, I liked the scond one but I think that the idea of human mind is missing. I´ve seen your portfolio and one possible idea would be adding the "Entry #2 Neuforoco" to that logo "Hatch.im" (where there´s a man profile with lamps in his head). Maybe the neuron colud sobstitute the lamps. And try to use the red color.
Hi Raymer, this time I didn't like the red neurons. They look like blood squirting from his head and I'd like something more stylized . And I thought that blue and red would be nice but ... Maybe you should try grey and orange. Thank you.
We have been discussing and the partners suggest a modification: could you please try number 17 without the neuron inside the circle and maybe with targets inside them? This would be pretty close to what we were thinking about.
Thanks for the changes, Ray. We have been discussing and we realized that the target inside the circle looks great, a very catchy image, but we will also have children as clients, so maybe it could give the wrong impression. We didnt have any other idea to change it, so it would be nice if you could come up with something else that doesnt look as we will teach kids how to shoot.