NemesisLogo Design Contest

I like the font on these, it looks good. Try and make the logos look as agressive as possible and powerful.
Can we see a version without the body also? (to see what it would look like).
Can you also please adjust the body to have a more manga/ninja feel (sharper lines, more ridged body, to match the sharp lines in the text). The example of a figure below has a nice example of a explosive cloud around it showing speed
http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2465/3638548903_a1189a398f.jpg&imgrefurl=http://blog.espol.edu.ec/tchavez/&usg=___r5tKAhN5buoFgm3FIVEtYtaLHs=&h=338&w=450&sz=126&hl=en&start=3&zoom=1&tbnid=-FggJvpy01_wUM:&tbnh=124&tbnw=165&ei=n4tGUNueGJCtiQfl8YHIDg&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dmanga%2Bpic%2Bflying%26tbnh%3D130%26tbnw%3D173%26hl%3Den%26client%3Dsafari%26rls%3Den%26sig%3D101626920819906503945%26biw%3D1280%26bih%3D636%26tbs%3Dsimg:CAQSEgl_12Or-ZApwvCHGWuz7F140Xg%26tbm%3Disch&itbs=1&iact=rc&dur=366&sig=101626920819906503945&page=1&ved=1t:429,r:2,s:0,i:61&tx=80&ty=48&biw=1280&bih=636

Can we try a navy blue (darker than the one) above to see what it would look like also.

With the figure, look a bit more like the figures in the following photos? Maybe some harder edges to the figure to match the text also (it looks a bit soft).
(see pics 10, 11, 12, 17)
http://www.babylon-freefly.com/media/18/dubai.html?&page=2

What would it look like with white on the inside of the text, like this example?
http://www.superstreetbike.com/features/0909_sbkp_win_free_motorcycle_gear/photo_02.html

Hi Nemesis,
Thank you for your feedback, i will be gladly do revisions as your request.
But i am currently have some offline things to do, will be back with update in about 12 hours

Best Regards
Medi

Hi Medi, that would be great if you could get back to me. thanks.
Remember to keep trying to make the logo look aggressive, powerful, dangerous, strong, etc.
Can we see what the logo would look like with a darker blue also (ie navy). maybe this would help.

Can we also try entry #22 with Silver inside the text rather than white.

Hi Nemesis,
I am back online now and preparing update for your suggestions, will be back to you with updates less then 1 hour:)

Best Regards
Medi

Hello again:), please let me know what you thing about these update : #46 #47 #48 #49

these look good Medi, thanks. let me know have think about it.

Thank you, i still have more, but still in progress, be back shortly with new ones:)

thanks. i have to ask my team mates opinion also.
can you try one (for example based on #48) where "Team" is on the top and "Freefly" is below the word Nemesis?

I like the spikes you have added to 49, 48 and 46 (makes it look fast)

Sure, will update shortly
Thank you:)

update:
based on 48: #51 #52
another ones: #53 #54

also #55

thanks. let me have a think about it.

for #48 would it be possible to see what it would look like to exchange the figure for a symbol (say a lightning bolt)?

Sure, update with lighting bolt: #56 #57

and #58

ok thanks. dont worry too much about the specific ranking of your logos at this stage. i need to have a think about it and discuss with team mates.

if you have any further ideas please post them.

Ok, will keep try for more ideas.
Feel free if there are something to revise

thanks. can i see what #57 would look like without the spikes.
also, can you see what the "nemesis" would look like in #1 if filled in with light silver and raised like the ninja star in this:
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/801/imagesca71ocal.jpg/

Sure, update: 57 without spikes: #65
please check the #1 with light silver, are these correct?: #66 #67

thanks. i like the raised text in "nemesis" and the light silver in #66

Dear Nemesis Team,
Thank you for the current rank, i am honored that you like my works.
I just want to let you know that i am still open for any more revision in case you still need it, so feel free.

Best Regards
Medi

just waiting on some comments from my team mate.

any ideas feel free to post them. is there a way we could use the "N" and the lighning bolt as a sort of short symbol? (ie to print on places were we dont have space for the whole logo)?

Hello again Nemesis, sorry for late response, i was offline for last 24 hours,
please check the symbol for N and the Lightning Bolt #121 #122 #123