I like the text in example #1 (the outline). I like how the figure looks like he is moving out of the page (gives a 3D feel). With the figure, can we make the arms be more by the side of the body? and look a bit more like the figures in the following photos? Maybe some harder edges to the figure also (it looks a bit soft and fat). (see pics 10, 11, 12, 17) http://www.babylon-freefly.com/media/18/dubai.html?&page=2
thanks. the figure is much better now! can you try and see what the would look like with a black background. also can we see what the logo would look like with a bit of blue in it? (keep trying to make it look aggressive and powerful, masculine, strong, etc).