Sorry, I did not mean the text portion of the whole design. I think the text is good. I'm talking about the umbrella graphic. I think it's missing something.
I'm torn between the bolded NEJAME and the other one. I think the bolded one will come out better on clothing and other media. Can you address the graphic? I feel like it's missing something.
I like the font on the text. Could you do one with NEJAME more bolded. Also I feel like the graphic is missing something. I like it, but it feels kind of bland.
Can you revise your logos so the NE is not bolder than the other letters in NeJame? Perhaps make them all bold. I do really like the umbrella design. I'd like to see some other variations of that with the text.
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