NebilityLogo Design Contest

We like the idea of using negative space to show the N but have a couple of comments

A. These don't show well on a dark back ground (negative white replace by negative black)
B. The orange components don't seem top flow well they look choppy, not sure what to say other than that

Points for the creative use of negative space and please take the comments above and try and refine

thanks for all the input I will try to fix in the next entry
best regards
sevi

revision .................

(This comment references Entry #141)

Thanks very nice, we think we like the orange in 142, could you try use on the N in 141,144

As to 142 the blue N doesn't seem glassy enough, the blue in 141 with highlights seems to be nicer if that can be applied to the N here

Nicely done, moving in the right direction

Also like what you did with the font, as to the specific font style we like font in entry 109, it's similar but slightly different in the b and l and t.

thanks I'll try to go in the direction you want
regards
sevi

revision ......

(This comment references Entry #152)

194 - I don't like the thin arc above or below the square, I think it either needs to go, or needs to be more obviously a continuation

187 - Did not care for concave effect, did like the central innerglow/backlight, think you should apply that effect to 188 and 194

188 - The way the tail of the N wraps around the back is leaves to thin of an arc, probably just hide it completely or shrink the globe a bit so it shows more of it

194 Can you make the depth a little deeper on the square and make it more of a cube?
194,159 Can you add an embedded simple nebula into these

nebula version.................

(This comment references Entry #212)

Thanks. This looks good. Can we please see a version of it on a black background as well as in black and white

I like 216 with some refinements

A. Can we make the cube a bit less hard (maybe the edges slightly rounded like a dice or even 194 while maintaining the cube?)

B. We like the simpler version of the "Nebula" that some others have recently used

new entry .......

(This comment references Entry #245)

black background version ......

(This comment references Entry #246)

245 - Kind of got the idea but

A. The gold blocks should be bigger than the blue
B. The gold blocks should be manipulated to look more like an N, one way of doing this is bending the bar so the end blocks form more of a N shape
C. The nebula pattern should be applied to the blocks, also purple is kind of out so an "all blue" or "all gold" treatment similar 237 or 233

thank you for everything
I will try to go that way
best regards
sevi

Ok sevi thanks, we appreciate all your effort in this.

249 looks better, I wish there was a better way to communicate the changes but iteration is the only way to get it just right (from our perspective I guess)

Anyway I think rounding the corners in all directions was what I was after here is a link to what I mean, not the position just the rounding of all edges

http://www.shutterstock.com/pic-11270614/stock-vector-black-cube.html

Also you might try and use a simpler nebula effect in the upper and lower parts vs. just the lower part