N the BoxLogo Design Contest

Like it, see if you can improve it a bit?

Good work ;)

Hi Al7omdi

Thanks for feedback and ranked, I am submit the improvement and I am still working in your contest and I will update as soon as possible. If anything to modified don't hesitate to tell me.

Regards

Jefry

I love #118.

Could we make it less formal? remember our clients are mostly teenagers. So we would like a screaming blue color, more vibrant than this.

Also we need it to be bolder, louder, and more daring. See if you can tilt something it to make it stand out.

Thanks.

Thanks for the opportunity, I will update as soon as possible.

Regards

Jefry

Jeff! while your at it, Please see the file I uploaded to the contest page, could you apply your idea into something similar to that?

Hi Al...

I am submit new entries base on your uploaded file. If anything to modified don't hesitate to tell me.

Regards

Jefry

"I love #118.

Could we make it less formal? remember our clients are mostly teenagers. So we would like a screaming blue color, more vibrant than this.

Also we need it to be bolder, louder, and more daring. See if you can tilt something it to make it stand out.

Thanks."

I like the more recent ones, but maybe make it more Cheerful? do it with brush stroke?

Thanks

Hi Al

Sorry I am late respond your request. I am have dinner with my familiy. After I am back I am really surprise contest will be end 3 minutes remain. In judging mode only the first rank can submit the revision. If you don't mind and still want to look my revision you can change the first for temporary. I will submit the revision, fopr you. I am really sorry about this situastions, I hope you understand and give my another chance.

Regards

Jefry