Could you modify this to a small clump of trees--something that would be more suggestive of a forest?
Another thought is to give the bottom of the "e" a small lake...would that work?
We like the green you have chosen, but we would prefer some kind of easily-recognized accent that reflects adventure, and the outdoors, such as water or mountains.
Can you change the shade of green that you are using to something else? We think that particular shade is overused. Perhaps something closer to what a forest might look like?
You have made the lower case letters thinner in this design than one of the original submissions, but can you make the letters just slightly thicker than these, but not as big as the original design that looked like this?
Except for contrast, it is not clear why the "e" is singled out to be a different color. Perhaps you could make the "n" the unique color (such as green), and then repeat the same color in some kind of an accent feature involving the "o". Some designers have put a colored dot in the "o", while others have tried using mountains and/or waves to suggest the outdoors. Perhaps you can add some kind of an accent to this logo?
We like how the letters overlap, so be sure to keep that!
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Another thought is to give the bottom of the "e" a small lake...would that work?
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Except for contrast, it is not clear why the "e" is singled out to be a different color. Perhaps you could make the "n" the unique color (such as green), and then repeat the same color in some kind of an accent feature involving the "o". Some designers have put a colored dot in the "o", while others have tried using mountains and/or waves to suggest the outdoors. Perhaps you can add some kind of an accent to this logo?
We like how the letters overlap, so be sure to keep that!
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