It is hard to tell that this is a mountain--looks more like a pyramid or just a triangle.
Can you alter the mountain graphic some how, and use a darker shade of green, as you did before?
Some have seen this design as looking like a person with arms. One other thought I had was to extend the green wave to include a bit of the "e", but without obscuring the letter. Is that possible?
Another idea regarding the mountain and wave combination is seen in the logo of Vancouver Island University--see it here: https://www.viu.ca/ Their mountains are more simplified.
Can I see a version of this with these changes: 1) Make the white line thicker between the letters 2) Add space between the 'FOR THE ADVENTUROUS' and the logo, 3) Make the bottom wave dark like the rest of the 'O'
This looks good . The wavey lines look more like air than waves. Maybe combine the top two lines into one? Also change the green to a lighter green (#a3cd36)
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Can you alter the mountain graphic some how, and use a darker shade of green, as you did before?
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I will Change and make a New E
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the end of the wave to the right
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I changed it and updated at #299
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I'll change it to a single wave line and change the color to green(#a3cd36)
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I will change
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I really like this design process, I will make a change in this logo combination of a wave and a mountain in the "O" to be more simple,
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I will change, and make a larger
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