I am liking where you are going. The RV still looks slightly like a delivery truck. The front is more flat and instead of the door on the side replace it with a window or two. I think that will look more like an RV.
Much better. It there a way you can make the top of the front more flat? There is that big hump on top. Google "class A motorhome" and look at the pictures to get an idea. I like where it is going. Nice job
Try increasing the back widow size just a little. Usually class A's back window's are large. Also I like how ibot's idea is in something that looks like a google maps pin. Do you have any ideas that you could improve on that? Or add your own twist to it?
sure, i can increase the back window, but i can't use ibot idea (google maps pin) it's not allowed to use others designer specific idea. i will think something to improve my design soon
Thanks. I actually just read that in the rules and was going to email you back. If I put it in the comment box is that ok? or is that not allowed at all?
I think I like how simple ibot's idea is. Maybe on your improvement try something super simple like the trip advisor owl. Something that is really easy to recognize.
it's okay we're designers here respect each others and dont want to steal others idea. I guess I will work on my next improvement to simplify that. thank you