I them both --- I don't think we need the text bubble on #24. The only thing I don't like here is the expression of the toddler. I think he needs to be happy or smiling. Here are a few idea....
1. Show me a design like #25 but put the "My Talking Toddler underneath and then put a text/talk bubble above his head.
2. Show me #25 as-is but with a better expression on the toddler.
We are really close here. Let's fine tune it! Great work!
I guess the text bubble doesnt really belong or go. The illustration is a bit better but still needs some work to bring it to life and give it a personality. Doesn't seem like a finished illustration.
I also think we get rid of the toy in his hand.
This is the concept I want - just need to find the right font and illustration.
I like #48 and #47 but I have another idea -- why not put a DVD in his hand instead of the rattle?
Also -- I think the face of the boy needs a little work. It just seems a little cold or missing expression or detail. Maybe it's too white? -- I am not sure how to explain it but it just is missing a little detail and warmth.