On entry 17 could you add the tagline "strategic creativity" that you have on entry 19 please. I do like these all. Simple and very cool. Everyone is so stubborn on the whole eye thing. Any way to keep the note and move away from the little eyeball?
I modified my briefing and I like your work. Please re read it. Again, I am not saying no to where you have gone but I'd also like to see some pictoral stuff. Re read the briefing in general. There have been small modifications as well. I'm a fan