I really like these submissions, but to me, they almost seem like they would be better for T-shirt designs than logos.
I like the concept of the letters stacked as obstacles and arrows interacting with them. However, I am not sure if I like how "ME" stands out because it could be seen as self-centered which does not fit with our brand.
What about some submissions with:
MOVE
MENTAL
rather than:
MO
VE
ME
NT
AL
Maybe throw in some abstract lines, arrows, or movement symbolism to even out the rows? These design elements could maybe also act as a logo independent of the text.