Great adjustments to the mountains. In order to keep the theme of primary care, it would be great to add a stethescope to the logo.
The font is better as well. Possibly a lighter blue for the slogan so that the only green is the mountains. Also, I'm wondering if only having the "You" capitalized, or only the "Helping" capitalized would look better?
Thank-you for incorporating the stethoscope - it has great potential. Entry #13 is on the right track - keeping the figure with the two mountains - I'm just not sure of the placement of the stethoscope. It looks like it's trying to slither up the mountain! Entry #14 was ranked lower because it may appear as if there are three separate ideas-Mountains, then man, then stethoscope. Also, entry #15 is the less desirable because the mountains now look like a cardiac rhythm and the stethoscope looks too big for the picture.
As per font, I like blue color in "Helping you feel better" and would prefer both the title font and slogan to be bolded text. Finally, the little swoosh under the "better" was a nice touch, or possibly, an alternate placement for the stethoscope could be under the "feel better" words of the slogan?
This has been great fun - too bad it all ends tomorrow.
Another thought, how about a combination of Entry # 13 and #15? The idea would be to have the stethoscope underneath the person (with the 2 mountain ranges and person the same size as Entry # 12), and have the bell of the stethoscope still go to the "o" in the word "Mountain"- that was clever!. The two mountain ranges may need to be flipped 180 degrees in order to allow for room for the ear pieces of the stethoscope on the right of the logo?
The font is great on Entry # 28 and it would be good to see this exact font on Entry # 12. You followed our instructions perfectly! I feel bad because the seeing the new stethoscope placement did not end up with the desired effect we were looking for. It may be too busy and the stethoscope may appear just a little too realistic compared to the rest of the image.
Thank-you very much for your hard work. Deciding between 1st and 2nd choice has been very, very difficult. If you are available, is there anyway you could move the mountain down a little on Entry #30?