thanks, could you please make the tip of the feather just a thick line (curved) but without colour filling) ? also is you can make the eye iris a little smaller, so wings adn body of the bird become not so wide and the space you gain you can use for make the feathers a little bigger and less curved. finally can you make the hot cold colour of the feather equal in size as the colod half? p.s. do you think the eye iris is ok a circle or better ovalize a bit ? thx a lot
hi, can i ask you to delete the external oval (looks uneccesary to me as the shape is pretty defined, what do you think?); separate the 2 feathers a little bit (leave some space between them); put the longituidinal line (rachis of the feathers) in the middle so to distribute equally the left and right tiles; you can mirror the above one, so to hte have the hot colours "inside" or switch them, both are ok; thank you very much.
for the colors of the eye iris, i'm divided between grey (it remembers my dad grey ice eyes... and the "sun" iris you made, i'll decide soon, both are good)
good, i'd say to refine this adding the rachis that runs thru the feather longitudinally, so divide the feather in 2 sides; filling one side with hot colors tiles, and the other side with cold colors tiles; the you just mirror the feather below, so we have just one kind of feather, drafted 2 times, one above the bird and one below. thanks a lot
great, another request (arghhhh), can you edit a little the mosaic image that wraps the bird, and render it a 2 feather (one above the bird where now there are the hot colours, and one below where there are the cold colours) same position, but instead of 2 aninomous shape, create 2 feathers filled with coloured mosaic. at this point what about using the blue colour family only for the bird and use just the hot colours for the feathers? make it sense? or it's better to use a wide variety considering that feather often have great range of colours? big thank you again.
good start, i still can't figure out the mosaic tiles around in a square. do you think is better to enclose them inside the bird (o just in the wing for example) or let them outside but with a different shape? it's the conttrast of circle and sqaure shape that leave me uncertain....your opinion? thank a lot. btw please make the iris grey/silver instead of balck. you can use black for edges between tiles of mosaic.
hi, seen 97 and 98. i meant if you can other than move the noame outside, make the eye icon and the feather with the mosaic tile, but not the tiles insied the eye. or you can convert the circle into an ellipse (almost eye icon) and draw the feather inside it or crossing it, but the mosaic tiles should not be in the eye, eventually just in the iri, but better in the feather icon or in the back ground. thanks a lot.
hi, can you amke the changes ? also make a sort aof bird wih the left part of the eye, in order to blen togheter the eye and bird/freedom/feather concept. you can put the name below oor above...and use all the space necessary for the icon. and fill the icon with coloured tiles of mosaic. thanks you very much.
hi, good job, can you move the name outside the circle and try to make the image something like an eye with simple filling colour and the blue and black circle that is up try to make it an icon in order to simbolize the iris of hte uman eye. it can be of course not exactly a circle but another form or drawing. ask me if i didn't explain well, thanks
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Kindly review new update #186,
Oval irish #187
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please do not hesitate to ask me for revision.
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You're very welcome.
Kindly review #183, #184, #185
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Kind, Stella
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Yes :)
I make the eye representing the sun
and I want to make the color balanced between hot and cold color.
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Thank you so much for your feedback.
I was run out ideas :(
I will submit another design soon.
thank you so much.
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Stella
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Thank you for your feedback, I will submit another ideas.
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Kindly review #97, #98
is it like that? more feedback are welcome.
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