Thank you for the new versions. We are going to move forward with another design, only because of the way this crosses the text. But we appreciate your work!
This is one of our favorites. Thank you for adding in the reflection where the sun it hitting the yellow - that's really nice. And the colors overall are terrific. (Would still like to add in some blue.) The one issue is that we don't want this to be on top of the words. What about bringing the whole circle to the left of the words? The part where it tapers toward the "O" still works, but flip the circle over to the left. It could be a little smaller that way, too. Or, you could maybe make it fade out where it crosses the words. If you do that, please use the placement you had in the original design (#248). I think it might be better to move it to the left of the words though.
Really like this a lot. A few requests: could you add in some blue, perhaps just before the purple starts on the big circle? I like how you have the top of design #247 (or #30) look like it's reflecting sunlight. Is there a way to have that same kind of shine on this circle? Lastly, we don't want to cover up the words. Could the circle be smaller so it goes between the words "morning" and "light"? Please keep "strategy" centered as you have it (unless you have a better idea - but I don't want it under the word "light") and let the circle break under "strategy".
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