More Business LLCLogo Design Contest

"MB" concept

(This comment references Entry #32)

Hi, I would like to see entry #33 and#32 with a color other than gray for the slogan. Is there a way to highlight the slogan a bit more in the design?

updated the slogan color

(This comment references Entry #35)

thanks, on entry #38, I like how you have the design (pictorial mark?) on the left of the words. Can you enlarge the pictorial mark and give it two colors? Perhaps the same as the two colors in entry #35, but instead of the word "more" being gold, the slogan could be gold.

updated

(This comment references Entry #63)

Thanks for the update with entry #63. Actually wanted the word MORE in blue and just the slogan in gold, however, the letters are so small in the slogan that it doesn't get noticed. What would it look like if it occupied two lines and had a little larger font? For example:

Building a Better Society
Through Better Business

bolder the slogan

(This comment references Entry #77)

Thanks, I still think the word MORE needs to be blue

ups...sorry for the misunderstood, here the revised
thanks

(This comment references Entry #88)

Can we see what #89 looks like with a slogan that simply says "Building a Better Society" ?
that way you can make it larger

updated

(This comment references Entry #90)

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(This comment references Entry #172)