On #10, I like the font, use of color, and the way it shows rapid movement. No one else has done that so far. There are two issues I have. The first is that it doesn't look like a moose. It looks more like a deer or elk with the thin snout and light antlers. The second is the layout. I often need a relatively square layout, like #9. #10 works well for a web page header, but might not be as good in a square. Perhaps the graphic could be on top of the text, like #9, but that might affect the look of movement.
For #9, the image doesn't look enough like a moose for me. I also prefer the colors in #10. Thanks.
#88 and #90 are really good. When I first saw them, I thought they were the winner for sure. I'm not sure how to make them better. I think it would be making them more eye catching while adding a level of polish. I tell you, I am going to feel badly for anyone in the top 5 who doesn't win. You guys all did a great job.
submit new concept entries.. #122 #123 moose jump over media, with color gradations n other is flat more tweak on moose shape.. dont hesitate to ask me everything..
I'm sorry, I don't see these as better. In #88, the squares in back of the moose are tight, giving the impression of the moose moving fast. In the new ones, it looks more like the moose broke through a glass. I prefer the speed, so I would stay with that idea.
We switched to #145 for the colors in the moose. You will surely be in the top 5, and have made a lot of progress on the top spot. What I would suggest from here is: - Switching the green and blue in the lettering - Putting some kind of lighting effect on the lettering and possibly the blue around the moose. - #152 had some rectangles along with the squares. That added to the speed of it, so you might try a little of that. Not quite the same arrangement, though.
There's a lot of goodness here. The idea to outline the moose really works. The highlighting of the letters also works well. I think the middle letters got a little light and washed out. I also wonder what it would like like with the tag line "On time, on budget, locally grown"?
I truly appreciate your effort. We'd like to create subsidiaries so we can use more logos!