Moose DogLogo Design Contest

I don’t want the lettering to touch the tongue at all. Can you do just three dots in each place they are?

I added a new entry #76

Bring “moose dog” out from under the tongue.
The right antler looks better without the hard line under it but it still looks like it’s coming from behind the head. Can you bring the stem down just a little bit so that it looks more like it’s coming out the side?

Please see the entry #71

Collar looks good but the bean tag still looks a little off. I also would like for the angel of the dog head to be closer to that of #40, I don’t care for it being straight.

Please see entry #65 for the changes.
Thanks!

I like the angel of the dog head in #40 (I don't much care for the head straight up and down in this one) and how the tongue was in between the words.
Can you elongate the bean tag so that it looks more natural/realistic?
Also, the right antler still looks like it's shooting out from behind the head. Can you make it look more like it's coming out of the head?
And just a little bit heavier on the definition in the tongue.

These antlers and color on #40 (but with it saying 'moose dog' ) . I also would like the collar to have a more natural look. Maybe a little thinner and formed to his neck. Can you also make the right antler look more like it's coming from his head?

Yea. Maybe just a little bit too close. Can you also add the collar back in with a coffee bean tag.

As for the antlen, I've moved it closer, as you suggested. Maybe too much.

Thank you! Sorry, my bad. I thought about putting both, also 'coffee roasting'. Yet I didn't find the right place and removed... the other one. My mistake. I'm going to work on it tomorrow evening. Thanks!

This looks awesome! Can you make the right antler look more like it’s coming out of his head rather than from behind it? Change ‘coffee roasting back to ‘moose dog’. I like the idea of having ‘coffee roasting’ or just ‘coffee’ somewhere if you can fit it in a smaller font but ‘moose dog’ is a must. And can you change the color to olive drab?

I like the head and antlers quite a bit I would just ask to bring the right antler in closer to the head a little bit (just a shorter stem). Can you do this as just a two-toned stencil? I like the tri color look for a sticker but I need this to look good as a rubber stamp as well. I would like to see something different than the banner and circle background and would like to try a different font.