Moose DogLogo Design Contest

rearranged letters, rechecked spacing and some small realignment done.
found a small glitch, corrected.

oh...and made the lines of the head and antlers a little thicker.

spaced letters...reshaped a bit the ring and bean.
had to rotate the text a few pixels...

uploading now...took a while but i think this is it...

Can we even out the spacing on all of the lettering? They don't need a huge amount of spacing I just don't want the letters to touch.

Also move the ‘M’ our from under the tongue.

Not so much. I’m looking for it to naturally fit where the second “O” would be. So where it’s at now just looking more like it belongs there.

so basically turn the bean slightly to the left ..to cover the first "O" ?

I think I like where this is going.
Can you align the coffee bean to where it fits naturally in the word?
I was wanting heavier lines on the dog head and antlers but I do like the heavier border as well so we can keep that too!

i'll work it and upload as fast as i can.

Can you: make the border lines a little bit thicker?
Make the neck line more like #44 and add the collar back in with a coffee bean tag?
Make the ring bigger to encompass more of the main image and also make room for the collar and tag?

revision :
text reworked. more solid "O"s.
reworked allover , left some distress effect here and there, added tongue shadow, removed all the wisps , left a few but thicker, where necessary .

I also liked the 'roughness' of the stenciled parts in the other version, I just wanted to do away with the wisps.

Can you bring the right antler in closer to the head some, make the whole logo green, give some texture to end of the tongue (like in the previous version), and make the 'O's a little more solid while still retaining some weathering look (we want this to look good and legible as a rubber stamp)? I don't much care for the tufts of hair on the neck line in either version and would prefer just the stenciled look to match the rest.

corrected some very small glitches.

heavily simplified.
layout used as per ranked entry.

i'll simplify this head and antlers.
thanks.

Yes. I saw that the antlers are simpler in the other two. Maybe those without the wisps would be good. I think I would like this with the green border as well.

i can try. in the meantime maybe check my other two entries.
the head and antlers are heavy simplified, and in one of the entries the antlers are smaller.
thanks,
Best, Dan

Can you simplify the dog head a little by eliminating the wispy shadowing and simplifying the bottom neck line some so that it’s not as textured? Also eliminate some of the antler root on the right hand antler to bring it in closer to the head and cut out some of the smaller detailing in the antlers themselves. I like the antlers having some texture to them but maybe just some of the chunkier stuff.