with # 92 in the word MoonBeam, take out the white shadow referrence and leave the blue in the O and make the letters solid charcoal gray, not all black.
with # 83 we would like to see more of a dynamic script, as the one presented is too flat. Also the word productionz needs to be a larger font.
thanks for making the changes. the logo #145 in cursive is too "flat" and needs more pizzaz. We like the cursive font, but just too flat and no "life" to it.
We are still reviewing the 2 other submissions.....