Hi Denzu! I like you designs here. I like the concept and the different texts. The character is key for me. I like the one you picked but I need a little more. I would like to see a tie, trench coat or rain coat with a collar. I am not sure about the shadowing on the eyes that you have now. It looks a little like he is wearing a sleeping mask. He needs to be super cool looking. If you fix him up a bit you will definately be in the running!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!