Montana Vine and WineLogo Design Contest

Of course.

This looks better. Thank you for making the adjustment. Could you try the Montana in cursive? The word and also a little smaller.

Although it may need a space filling. I try not to put a bottle drawing, because it will look bad on the label. Drawing the bottle on the bottle seems to me a bad idea.

Here we give the impression what this person has in his head and what he thinks about. He thinks about vine and wine.

Thank you for your comment. I will try to change something.

This is very creative and memorable. We were wondering if you could make the wording for vine and wine the same color as the wine in the glass. Also move the words vine and wine up closer to the state. Another idea we would like to see is the Vine and Wine stacked underneath the state. So like Montana
Vine and
Wine. It might help balance out the wine glass.

Honestly, I do not have much to change here.
It is clean, legible and I can not add or subtract anything here.

No, it's taking away from the easy flow you had earlier...

Yes, very true...…….

It depends on the application. For example, a label with a frame, a t-shirt without a frame.

Perhaps it needs the border, not sure.

I imagined this logo on a clean white label.

I do sort of like it, simple, yet bold with the contrasting red and white breaking-up the strong blk. state.

I only noticed today that the shape of montana is a human face and I wanted to use it in the logo. A man smelling wine.

Yes, it took a second, but I did see the face...that's using one's imagination!!

I hope you see what I wanted to convey to this logo?