I like #46. Would there be a way that you could add clouds and/or a sun coming up behind the mountain? What about working a slogan into it? Is it too busy, or just keep it simple?
Consider how I would put this on a trailer that would probably be white in color? Or a black hard plastic bag type on the front of the segway?
Maybe something orange in the one wheel like a hubcap?
How about this entire logo inside the outline of Montana?
So, please read the revised brief - I have to have segway in some special wordmark. Can you change that?
So people are really liking this one. 45/46, you need to change Segway font, and can you maybe make the "T" more noticeable? Also try the comments made earlier.
Ok - I am definitely leaning towards yours. I'd like you to try tweaking 80 and 81 with the segway person. It just looks like an orange blob riding it. Notice the bodies in submission #73, 72, or 61. the gal has short sleeves, longer hair, and you can see both arms. I don't think I want you to do much with the pants, because the segway bar separates the legs - we have to have that, but the upper body - see what you can do.
Also, can you make the slogan catch the glide a little more bolder, with a little more space between catch the glide?
Also, I might have you take out the suns rays - the sun is good, but might not want to do the rays - we will see.
Also, the blue circle around 84 - throw that around 80 and 81. Also, please put catch the glide on the top - that is what people seem to like.
And last, what about maybe the little segway man icon on the woman's chest? Can that be done?
Greetings! Everyone has liked your latest design, and of course some final changes can be done by us when you turn over the logo - right?
The only thing I will want to play with is the font, boldness, and italics of the words ride the glide. In small form, on the computer screens, it is still a little tough to read.
Anyway, we do like this very much. Thanks for all your efforts. This contest will be ending soon!