Please remove the weight plates from the ends. Please make the font bold with slightly rounded letters and close all the gaps on the letters. Please make the orange "fitness" a bit larger too. Lastly, please look at making the kettlebell a bit larger so the "o" is the same size as the other letters in the name. It's okay if the kettlebell handle sticks up above but we want the letter "O" to be similar in size as the other letters, just a kettlebell. Your "m" at the end is perfect. Thank you for using our actual "M".
I believe I have made most of the changes you requested but, unfortunately, I cannot place the barbell on the 'fitness' line, because this concept has already been presented by at least one other designer.
Thank you for your submissions. We love our barbell. Here's our feedback for the next round.
1. Momentum needs to be spelled out. We like the blocked but soft lettering.
2. Please look at our existing logo and add in our orange M at the end to be consistent.
3. Love the coloring or your barbell. Can you add it to the fitness line. It can be centered, left justifies just make it part of the word fitness. Also if centered can you play with a few options of the second line being rounded.
4. Can you play with adding a kettle bell in the first O in Momentum. It can be hollow, 1 color like you have, 2 colors.
5. You can also play with a hollow kettle bell maybe around the first M of Momentum.
6. Please remove the word Gym.
I must apologise for the 'hurried' appearance of my submissions (#178, #179 and #180) - I saw your contest for the first time around 30 minutes ago and have to leave the house now for Christmas family commitments, so didn't have time to 'polish' the designs.
They can be developed further in the next round if you think any of these concepts have potential.
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Please see #228 and #229. Both designs use fonts that I have created myself - are either of them close to the look you are aiming for?
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Please remove the weight plates from the ends. Please make the font bold with slightly rounded letters and close all the gaps on the letters. Please make the orange "fitness" a bit larger too. Lastly, please look at making the kettlebell a bit larger so the "o" is the same size as the other letters in the name. It's okay if the kettlebell handle sticks up above but we want the letter "O" to be similar in size as the other letters, just a kettlebell. Your "m" at the end is perfect. Thank you for using our actual "M".
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This is a variation to #178.
I believe I have made most of the changes you requested but, unfortunately, I cannot place the barbell on the 'fitness' line, because this concept has already been presented by at least one other designer.
I welcome any further feedback you may have.
Regards,
Steve
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It's after 11pm here and I just returned from a family event, so I will work on the revisions tomorrow morning.
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1. Momentum needs to be spelled out. We like the blocked but soft lettering.
2. Please look at our existing logo and add in our orange M at the end to be consistent.
3. Love the coloring or your barbell. Can you add it to the fitness line. It can be centered, left justifies just make it part of the word fitness. Also if centered can you play with a few options of the second line being rounded.
4. Can you play with adding a kettle bell in the first O in Momentum. It can be hollow, 1 color like you have, 2 colors.
5. You can also play with a hollow kettle bell maybe around the first M of Momentum.
6. Please remove the word Gym.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
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I must apologise for the 'hurried' appearance of my submissions (#178, #179 and #180) - I saw your contest for the first time around 30 minutes ago and have to leave the house now for Christmas family commitments, so didn't have time to 'polish' the designs.
They can be developed further in the next round if you think any of these concepts have potential.
Happy holidays!
Cheers,
Steve