MobilityLogo Design Contest

Thank you so much! I'm deciding between this one and the one with no birds. I'll pick one of yours as the winner shortly. By tomorrow at the latest. Congratulations!

sorry have to wait my friend...
here your request...
more clean with 3 bird flying to the sun.
anything else?

rgd, cetakaos

Make it just 3 or 4 birds total please

This looks great! Very clean. My new favorite! Nicely done!

revision #65
clean without bird.
any other request...?

rgd, cetakaos

revision #65
Bird flying straight out towards the sun.

And do one with NO birds

Can you make the birds flying in sync. not in a line, but flying straight out towards the sun.

This one is AMAZING!!!

Definitely!

alternative revision from design #64
what do you thing?

here my revision
am I in right direction?

Thanks for understanding...
OK..I work on it and let me see how I can Help you this time..

no problem. do you see how 'mobility' looks italicized? Can you make the word "Mobility" not Italicized? Does that make sense?

Sorry I cannot understand my friend...:(
Can you describe more clearly?
My English not good ...

Can you make the MOBILITY wording straight up and down, not at an angle?

You can get all my entry I will sent it by email after we finished the contest...

Thank you! You had the right idea the first time! I appreciate you letting me at least see what it would look like!

here your last request my friend...
anything else?

rgd, cetakaos

That is fantastic. Thank you!

you will get it my friend.
the standard in Logo tournament will be get 1 format in bitmap (JPEG) and 1 format in vector (EPS) all in high resolution...
but if you want more other format I will sent you by email, after you choose the winner..you can keep my word.

rgd, cetakaos

Hi! Ok you're in first place. You did a really great job with this! Will you be able to send me high resolution as well as other formats? And will you be able to give me the color codes?

Hi mobility,
We are on selection phase now, only 1st rank can submit revision,sorry my friend buf if you want me to make revision you can put me to 1st rank first ...

Rgd, cetakaos

let's take a look at one change- let's make the sun go the length of the word mobility. Make the sun as wide as the word and truck cab

Nicely done!!

hi mobility123,
this is my final shoot, hope you like it..

rgd, cetakaos

color alternative fuschia

revision color,
what do you thing?

same thing here. This color is pink. not fuschia or neon pink.

you're definitely getting closer! nice edits. I still need the colors to pop a little more. We're in the trucking business, so maybe a little less sweet and a little more strong side. If that makes sense

another color alternative

color revision

also, maybe instead of palm trees, you do birds flying in the distance? I love palm trees, but they symbolize islands, which are stagnant. my company Moto is to never be stuck, never be stagnant, always keep striving and moving towards greatness

Totally in the right direction! Can you make the colors even BRIGHTER? Think Neon colors. like highlighters.

revision.
am I in right direction,
any other suggestion?

rgd, cetakaos

ok...I work on it now...

I think the font is still too hard to read, and I'm looking for super bright colors all throughout. The dark purple isn't really 80's neon. Do you think you could keep the truck concept driving through the sunset, but change the font on mobility so it's easier to read and make everything brighter colors. This reminds me of Colorado cool, not California cool. But again, I do like it. It just needs some major tweaking.

thanks for your feedback mobility123,
here some revision base on your last feedback.
any other suggestion..

rgd, cetakaos

It's actually pretty cool! A little hard to read, and I don't like the green and brick red. Try making those more blues/purples maybe or fuchsia? Maybe a few less lines under the logo to help it be more legible?

Hi mobility123,
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

rgd, cetakaos