1. Could you please bring the orange circle slightly closer to the words MobileOmi?
2. Make the car another 5% bigger
3. Add more white to the bottom of the window to give more space for the man to be seen.
4. Add space between all letters in MobileOmi. It looks tight. Last time you added 1 pixel I think, but that was too much. Are you able to space out with .5 pixels?
5. Can you change the shape of the front of the car and add a headlight like this version? We are trying to add some additional details to the car.
One other version we are interested in (as we might want to see the car bigger), is to get rid of the big white M and but a car in the orange circle. Would you be able to show us that too? Thanks!
1. letter M has been made wider manually
2. the letter i dot has been raised
3. the car has been enlarge 5%
4. The font ( called "brandish" ) only have one version, there is no bold version. I have made more bold version ( 1 pixel bolder ) manually in #415 version
5. there is a man sitting in the car
This logo can be animated ( this is just my imagination, I am not expert in animation )
Letter O become the top of the car
Letter M become car body
Letter i become road and the dots of letter i become the wheels
car made from O + M + I ( horizontal i ). It more simple. can be used for icon in app, website, WA, facebook, pin, easy to remember, easy for embroidery
However, the car shape is one that many other designers used, including those who are finalists. We were looking for a cute, fun car shape, and the shape that you had was fun looking.
Also, WE wrote in our idea section that we're looking for something that suggests movement, and many designers used speed lines, which is really the only thing that I can think of to indicate movement--it is very generic. WE asked for this, it was not unique to Minima.
We were going to choose you as the winner last night, but waited until this morning.
I have to remove the first rank file because it has similarity in the shape of car, speed line, and head lamp. Other designer / MINIMA has taken me to logo court. I change the shape of car,. I hope you understand
The original Giorgio has dots in rectangle. in #391 version I changed the rectangle to orange circle. So the #391 is modified version of original Giorgio font
the font is giorgio ( only have two version ) this is normal and original version, The other is thinner version. So I add stroke about 4 pixel to make it bolder to #391
This is definitely going in the right direction, thank you. Since we will likely want to use this font in future branding, it would be super helpful to know that it is easily available. Can you let me know what font it is? Are there any other similar fonts where the o and b are perfect circles?
And a few more little tweaks:
1. please check that the width of the right arm of the M in the orange circles is the same all the way down. It looks a little wider towards the bottom, but that might just be an optical illusion.
2. Please check the part of the orange M at the very bottom where it breaks through the circle and goes from white to orange. On the right side it looks like it isn't quite touching, and it should be. I hope that makes sense.
And finally, could you do a version where the M in the orange circle does NOT have the right leg drop down? It would just be the length of the other 2 legs.
Thank you for doing that. I absolutely love this logo and definitely want to keep the overall look. But the font doesn't quite feel right. Are you able to find a sans serif font that is similar for us to look at?
1. Delete exhaust
2. Add headlight
3. Enlarge type slightly, as the orange Circle seems a little big in comparison.
4. Is this a handmade font?
5. The letter l appears to be leaning left and is too close to the letter i. Can this be fixed?
6. Can you make the capital M and O just a little but bigger-not much, just a slight bump up in size.
6. Are you able to put just a LITTLE more space between every letter in MobileOmi? We're concerned that when reduced in size it will look too tight.
Thanks!
1. Try making the circle about 1/3 smaller.
2. Fill in the body of the car with solid color/blue
3. Delete the exhaust coming out of the car.
Version 2
1. Make the same changes as in Version 1
2. Descend the left leg of the M similar to what you have on the right leg. Have it turn 90 degrees out to the left to create a "road" and place the car on it so the car is "driving" on the leg. Hope that makes sense.
We'd also like to see some additional colors used besides orange and blue. Maybe add bright lime green? Or try some other combos? (like maybe the dots on the letter i could be a third color) Thanks!
Great-thank you! Could you make the words MobileOmi a deep, bright navy blue? And make the car also the same navy blue? We'd like to see the car look less solid, so maybe a solid white semi-circle to suggest a window? And some movement lines coming off the car? Thanks so much!
Really like theses ideas, and seeing this is giving me some other idea. Hope I can convey them here through the text.
1. Love reversing out a letter, but I think the M is just too subtle. Could you try and reverse out an actual letter m (similar in style to the finger, just double that). I'm also wondering if you can make the reversed M look like a road (no details needed, just the line of the curves in the letter would look like it was a road).
2. Don't have the legs of the m drop off the bottom. Instead, show the entire "double hump" m within the circle.
3. One of the "legs" of the letter m could break through the circle of the "O" and become solid orange (so kind of an extension of the M, but in reverse once it extended beyond the circle part).
4. Incorporate a car (something very simple in shape like a VW bug) travelling along the solid orange line.
As we've been reviewing logos, we're finding we're drawn to something more on the cute and fun side rather than something overly bold. Again, really like the potential here and hope you can make sense of all of this. Thank you so much for your time!
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1. Could you please make the car just a little bit bigger like 2-3%?
2. Could you please VERY SLIGHTLY tighten the spacing of the M in Mobile? So there is just a little less white space between the legs of the M?
Also, will we be able to see the Black and White version?
Thanks!
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2. Make the car another 5% bigger
3. Add more white to the bottom of the window to give more space for the man to be seen.
4. Add space between all letters in MobileOmi. It looks tight. Last time you added 1 pixel I think, but that was too much. Are you able to space out with .5 pixels?
5. Can you change the shape of the front of the car and add a headlight like this version? We are trying to add some additional details to the car.
https://www.autoblog.com/2011/12/07/2012-volkswagen-beetle-turbo-review/
Thanks so much!
One other version we are interested in (as we might want to see the car bigger), is to get rid of the big white M and but a car in the orange circle. Would you be able to show us that too? Thanks!
2. the letter i dot has been raised
3. the car has been enlarge 5%
4. The font ( called "brandish" ) only have one version, there is no bold version. I have made more bold version ( 1 pixel bolder ) manually in #415 version
5. there is a man sitting in the car
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This is the master logo that we would like to work from. We like this font the best, but would like the following changes:
1. Can you make the M in Mobile a little wider so it looks like the m in Omi?
2. Can you raise the dots on the "i" slightly?
3. Can you enlarge the car very slightly-like 5% bigger?
4. Does this font come with a bold version, and if so, could we see a version of the logo with it?
Letter O become the top of the car
Letter M become car body
Letter i become road and the dots of letter i become the wheels
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However, the car shape is one that many other designers used, including those who are finalists. We were looking for a cute, fun car shape, and the shape that you had was fun looking.
Also, WE wrote in our idea section that we're looking for something that suggests movement, and many designers used speed lines, which is really the only thing that I can think of to indicate movement--it is very generic. WE asked for this, it was not unique to Minima.
We were going to choose you as the winner last night, but waited until this morning.
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And a few more little tweaks:
1. please check that the width of the right arm of the M in the orange circles is the same all the way down. It looks a little wider towards the bottom, but that might just be an optical illusion.
2. Please check the part of the orange M at the very bottom where it breaks through the circle and goes from white to orange. On the right side it looks like it isn't quite touching, and it should be. I hope that makes sense.
And finally, could you do a version where the M in the orange circle does NOT have the right leg drop down? It would just be the length of the other 2 legs.
Thanks again so much!
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2. Add headlight
3. Enlarge type slightly, as the orange Circle seems a little big in comparison.
4. Is this a handmade font?
5. The letter l appears to be leaning left and is too close to the letter i. Can this be fixed?
6. Can you make the capital M and O just a little but bigger-not much, just a slight bump up in size.
6. Are you able to put just a LITTLE more space between every letter in MobileOmi? We're concerned that when reduced in size it will look too tight.
Thanks!
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Looking for the left leg to drop down below the circle, more like what you have on the right side.
Add a line down the m
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Could you please make the following revisions?
Version 1
1. Try making the circle about 1/3 smaller.
2. Fill in the body of the car with solid color/blue
3. Delete the exhaust coming out of the car.
Version 2
1. Make the same changes as in Version 1
2. Descend the left leg of the M similar to what you have on the right leg. Have it turn 90 degrees out to the left to create a "road" and place the car on it so the car is "driving" on the leg. Hope that makes sense.
We'd also like to see some additional colors used besides orange and blue. Maybe add bright lime green? Or try some other combos? (like maybe the dots on the letter i could be a third color) Thanks!
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Nurwan
1. Love reversing out a letter, but I think the M is just too subtle. Could you try and reverse out an actual letter m (similar in style to the finger, just double that). I'm also wondering if you can make the reversed M look like a road (no details needed, just the line of the curves in the letter would look like it was a road).
2. Don't have the legs of the m drop off the bottom. Instead, show the entire "double hump" m within the circle.
3. One of the "legs" of the letter m could break through the circle of the "O" and become solid orange (so kind of an extension of the M, but in reverse once it extended beyond the circle part).
4. Incorporate a car (something very simple in shape like a VW bug) travelling along the solid orange line.
As we've been reviewing logos, we're finding we're drawn to something more on the cute and fun side rather than something overly bold. Again, really like the potential here and hope you can make sense of all of this. Thank you so much for your time!