hi this one but with the other more colorful truck. and can you increase the font in the tagline by 4 points and make it bold so it pops more. i think that will be a winner!
We like this truck the best. Can you use this truck but the font and copy lockup from the one in first place, and then move the truck to the right of the copy
hi really like this version! can you make the following edits
1) Lessen the effect on the "I" in marketing it gets lost
2) Try a different font for the tagline this one is too whimsical and doesn't fit with the rest of the design. Something more consistent with the other fonts, maybe the font you used for "MARKETING"
My apologies I'll be out again going to sleep here different timezone im living here in Philippines its almost midnight :) anyway you can send me your desired changes like your previous comments. I would be glad to assist you with the update thanks for understanding I'll be online in a few hours again.
you can post here a link with the picture or file you may want to share via dropbox or other sites that can store you files hope you understand we cannot submit emails after the contest is done its the logotournament proper policy via designers :)
this is very good. jsut a couple of edits to consider
1) the truck is a matte black paint around the screens can you edit
2) the screens themselves should show messaging to demonstrate what this is. can you work the tagline into the screens somehow and really make them pop?
3) i think the "marketing" in the logo font is getting lost. could you try a different background color or something to make it more prominent?
hi really like this design. a couple of revisions we would like to see...
1) can you tinker with the color pallette would like to see a different version with diffrent colors in the typset porton of the logo
2) the tagline could be punched up a bit i think
3) the actual truck is a matte black color could you work on that
4) the "screen" on the truck could be improved. maybe try putting the tagline on that in neon or something that pops..."HIGH IMPACT. LARGE FORMAT. DIGITAL OOH.
4) could we see a stacked version also?
we love this treatment and will likely want to go with it. thanks!
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1) Lessen the effect on the "I" in marketing it gets lost
2) Try a different font for the tagline this one is too whimsical and doesn't fit with the rest of the design. Something more consistent with the other fonts, maybe the font you used for "MARKETING"
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1) the truck is a matte black paint around the screens can you edit
2) the screens themselves should show messaging to demonstrate what this is. can you work the tagline into the screens somehow and really make them pop?
3) i think the "marketing" in the logo font is getting lost. could you try a different background color or something to make it more prominent?
other than that this is really good, thanks!
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1) can you tinker with the color pallette would like to see a different version with diffrent colors in the typset porton of the logo
2) the tagline could be punched up a bit i think
3) the actual truck is a matte black color could you work on that
4) the "screen" on the truck could be improved. maybe try putting the tagline on that in neon or something that pops..."HIGH IMPACT. LARGE FORMAT. DIGITAL OOH.
4) could we see a stacked version also?
we love this treatment and will likely want to go with it. thanks!