Hello! Just a couple of minor corrections if I could please...'Bakery' appears to not be quite centered on the bottom, could the whisk leave a bit to the right, could the center person on top not have a hat and then maybe have each person a bit bigger if possible and 5 different colors to make them atand out as different people in a grouping?
Very sorry about the confusion. I think yes, I prefer the group of 4 people but prefer the outline in this design. My worry was that they may not fit and be visually balanced - that you may have to adjust the placement of the words to fit properly.
Looking at this - considering space - perhaps the Mix & Mingle could be staggered with the group of people in the lower left sector - may make room for the fancy outline ? Just a thought...
Getting closer! Thank you for being open to comments :)
With half of the business being a community gathering space/meeting hang ... the Mingle part is important to us.
Without wasting a buncj of your design time, could you see putting the cute people from your design below the name (lose the hats) and maybe even add a 3rd of 4th person...perhaps drop in a few partial lines to define the logo as oval in shape?
I very much like the colors you've selected and the people are fabulous!
If I were to make suggestions...it feels to me like the visual emphasis is on 'Bakery', I'd prefer it to be on Mix & Mingle. I do also like the baking elements to be incorporated into the lettering, thus keeping the '&' symbol in the name. Lastly, the people overlapping the letters almost feels like an afterthought to me?
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Thanks much for your time!
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Getting closer! Thank you for being open to comments :)
With half of the business being a community gathering space/meeting hang ... the Mingle part is important to us.
Without wasting a buncj of your design time, could you see putting the cute people from your design below the name (lose the hats) and maybe even add a 3rd of 4th person...perhaps drop in a few partial lines to define the logo as oval in shape?
Thanks again :)
S
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I very much like the colors you've selected and the people are fabulous!
If I were to make suggestions...it feels to me like the visual emphasis is on 'Bakery', I'd prefer it to be on Mix & Mingle. I do also like the baking elements to be incorporated into the lettering, thus keeping the '&' symbol in the name. Lastly, the people overlapping the letters almost feels like an afterthought to me?
Again - thanks for your image :)
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