I like the idea of this picture, but we can BARELY see what is going on.
Is there any way you can enlarge the image? Change the color scheme to something with stronger tones? The pastels are don't POP. Communicate the 'farm culture' rather than the image of a small colonial town? And finally, I think we would prefer if the body of the text was all one shade.
Thank you so much for your submissions! I hope our feedback is helpful!