The idea is good, but it would be better if you can center "End" inside the cercle.
I like the font of this brand: http://www.bellerose.be/ Like "noun" font, perhaps you can use this type of font for "clothing" and find one more classical and rounded for "Mile End".
For #22 can you please: - put the circle inside "Mile"instead of "End" and inside clothing. - try an example with colors (3 max) - try an example with deep blue color instead of black