Do you have access to a font called "twobyfour" or something similar? If you google that font name, you'll see what we mean. Try something like that with #15 if you want.
We've put you back in the number 1 ranking, but we still feel the font is not quite right. If you want to try all lower case in black-and-grey or black-and-brown, etc., we think that might be a good move. By the way, we're not crazy about most of the lower case fonts being submitted...most of them are too round (like in your #13). We recommend staying away from most of the lower case fonts that have been tried thus far. Your designs are good. You'll definitely get a high final ranking, but we're just not completely in agreement yet.