Deejava, thank you for all of your work on this. You do really great work, and honestly I liked your designs better. Both the lighthouse and the boxed version around the map. They were more refined. My decision ended up being practical needing one that would easily translate into many different sign formats (I'm a sign shop). Also visibility, In the design I chose, the name takes up almost the entirety of the space, The lighthouse I'd lose 50% of the space to items other than the name. In a few years, when my business is based more on repeat business and I need to rebrand into something more refined, I'm coming back to you!
Hi Deejava,
I just moved this one to first place. What about making the stars a little smaller and maybe moving custom signs down a bit? Too much space dedicated to those stars right now IMO. Thank you!
This one with the Michigan map in light blue, and instead of three stars, three clean subtle waves in the same light blue. Nothing else changed. What do you think?
This one is cool too. Just wondering about the proportion of image to letters. Like the last comment I sent, I'm trying to maximize the name so it doesn't disappear on a business card, but I also don't want to completely lose the logo.
What if this was slight smaller and michigan custom signs slightly bigger? Also, what if the map was an outline that tied into the frame? Not sure about that but curious.
Thank you. Can you please make custom signs a little larger and the Michigan map and the triangles a little smaller? Maybe with some white space below the map?
A couple of thoughts, I think this one is better without the tagline. On a card it'll be so small it will disappear. What if we instead we put in 3 stars and make the customs sign words a bit bigger. Maybe shrink the lighthouse and rays a bit to make room. Also, not sure if it's overkill, but what if after those changes mentioned, the "o" in custom is replaced with the map of Michigan... maybe the upper peninsula of the map could cross the T. Or maybe for a different letter if you think it works better. I don't want to overcomplicate it, but the Michigan map is pretty iconic here.
I like this with the additional color. A couple of things... 1) could you try it with a different font for Michigan? It looks exactly like the University of Michigan font which is great, but 1/2 of the state likes Michigan State and I don't want to turn them off. Also, I'd like the custom Signs to be a bit bigger relative to Michigan... Can we do that without losing the diamond end markers?
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I just moved this one to first place. What about making the stars a little smaller and maybe moving custom signs down a bit? Too much space dedicated to those stars right now IMO. Thank you!
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