How are you? I hope all is well.
It is always good to take time, breathe, reflect.
It works for everything.
Thank you so much for the comments.
Here is the design with the change. The change with respect to the size of the man's figure is very small. I hope you are good.
Here I am submitting some new color proposals for your review #104#105#106#107#108#109#110#111. One more ice silver look. I've been reviewing some shades. I hope you like them.
What do you think? Any comments, please let me know.
Hi Daniel!
We are at the end so now I look at the details!
- I'm in love with the stelma, color, details ecc. The only thing we can work on is the height/form of the arms. The top would be like in the attached image because it is more powerful
- The font is perfect! But I would prefer if you could make a softer shade of the colors (in the blue version it is very heavy) and tending to the ice-silver color.
It’s not easy to explain… What does’t completely convince me of this version is the gap between the blue stelma and the silver writing
I would work on this and then decide where to put the stelma: with the "M" on the edge or not or above the writing (I'm re-thinking about it)
I like how the isotype looks, the figure of the man is powerful.
Regarding the integration of part of the letter M, perhaps it can generate visual conflict when it comes to small formats, since it can lose legibility. But no more than that.
Perhaps an idea would be to leave only the letter M, I don't know what you think.
I'm going to upload just one idea.
I think you can work on some different font (I like this types, not cartoon) and on the color of the body/stelma. I like a beautiful mirror effect on the body with light blue/silver color
- Better work on black background
- I prefer the font used at the beginning
- I prefer "metabolic equipe" write on 2 lines, not 1 line
- I really like the "M" on the border of the stelma
- The body shape seems like looks like a catholic crucifix so I think that we can work
Hello!! is a pleasure to greet you, it's an honor to be participating in your contest.
Here I have uploaded my logo alternatives for your review #8#9
Remember, if you have any other requirement, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure to continue working for you.
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How are you? I hope all is well.
It is always good to take time, breathe, reflect.
It works for everything.
Thank you so much for the comments.
Here is the design with the change. The change with respect to the size of the man's figure is very small. I hope you are good.
Remember, any other comment, please let me know.
Greetings. Daniel.
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I prefer this arrangement of the arms and text but in this logo the body is enlarged relative to the other.
Can you reduce the body size as the original?
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I hope all is well.
Thanks for keeping my design in the ranking.
Remember, if you have any other requirements, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure.
You have a good day. Daniel. ☺
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One with the original layout #116.
The other with a new layout of the text #117, due to the new figure of man
I hope you are good
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The only thing we can work on is the height/form of the arms. The top would be like in the attached image because it is more powerful
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I also apologize for not having understood correctly #112 #113 #114 #115.
Here I have uploaded new presentations with the color tests in the letters.
I hope you like it
Sincerely.
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Try using the old blue stelma and the metallic effect writing with these new colors of this stelma (silver-blue)
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Here I am submitting some new color proposals for your review #104 #105 #106 #107 #108 #109 #110 #111. One more ice silver look. I've been reviewing some shades. I hope you like them.
What do you think? Any comments, please let me know.
Greetings. Daniel.
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We are at the end so now I look at the details!
- I'm in love with the stelma, color, details ecc. The only thing we can work on is the height/form of the arms. The top would be like in the attached image because it is more powerful
- The font is perfect! But I would prefer if you could make a softer shade of the colors (in the blue version it is very heavy) and tending to the ice-silver color.
It’s not easy to explain… What does’t completely convince me of this version is the gap between the blue stelma and the silver writing
I would work on this and then decide where to put the stelma: with the "M" on the edge or not or above the writing (I'm re-thinking about it)
Thanks for your work!
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How are you? I hope all is well.
Thanks for keeping my design in the ranking.
Remember, if you have any comments or suggestions, do not hesitate to let me know.
Sincerely. Daniel.
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here new submissions for your review #86 #87.
What you think? You like it like that?
Any comments, please let me know
Greetings. Daniel.
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If the letter M, can generate visual conflict, we can see the same version but with the "M" outside the stelma
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I like how the isotype looks, the figure of the man is powerful.
Regarding the integration of part of the letter M, perhaps it can generate visual conflict when it comes to small formats, since it can lose legibility. But no more than that.
Perhaps an idea would be to leave only the letter M, I don't know what you think.
I'm going to upload just one idea.
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Not bad the 2 color!
I would like to know what you think according to your experience?
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What do you think of the changes? #58 #59
any other requirement, let me know please
Sincerely. Daniel.
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It would be nice to see this stelma with the previous text silver and a second version with a shading on the blue stelma and silver text
Thanks! Good work
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I think you can work on some different font (I like this types, not cartoon) and on the color of the body/stelma. I like a beautiful mirror effect on the body with light blue/silver color
Thanks for the work!
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Here are new changes for your review #32 #33. I hope they are well.
Your comments are welcome.
Greetings. Daniel.
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- I prefer the font used at the beginning
- I prefer "metabolic equipe" write on 2 lines, not 1 line
- I really like the "M" on the border of the stelma
- The body shape seems like looks like a catholic crucifix so I think that we can work
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Thank you very much for rating my design and your comments.
Here are some new proposals for review #16 #17 #18 #19 #20 #21. What do you think?
If you have any other comments, do not hesitate to let me know.
It will be a pleasure.
Sincerely. Daniel
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Maybe you can try to integrate the attached body shape image into the stelma! ;)
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We don't just deal with runners so I wouldn't want it to be misunderstood by a potential customer
You are on the right way!
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Thank you very much for rating my design.
Remember, if you have any other comments, do not hesitate to let me know.
It will be a pleasure.
Sincerely. Daniel ;)
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Here I have uploaded my logo alternatives for your review #8 #9
Remember, if you have any other requirement, please let me know.
It will be a pleasure to continue working for you.
Regards. Daniel. ☺