To be honest, I love the design but don't like that "Perfumes" is so small. It should be the central focus. Miami Lakes is secondary, so, I'm not quite sure if this is going to work or not, despite the fact it's by far my favorite design from any designer.
Farfi, I ended the contest early and selected you as the winner. I like the revision you made. However, I would still like to see "Miami Lakes" on top, and, "Perfumes" on the bottom.
Also would like to see the first M in Miami somehow incorporated into the bottle of the perfume, as you had done on some earlier designs.
Also would like to see a couple of different color schemes.