I like the colors and the concept - is there any way it can be made a little less "soft" in the blue scripted letters, the MFC? Something a little bit harder, fuller, closer to block letters, that still retains the color scheme.
Also, can we show it as "MFC PR," as an alternative to "MFC Public Relations?"
One more and we should be almost there . . . in #14, I am still hung up on the "f", which I don't like - I love the rest. Can you try a couple of different things with the "f"? Maybe just making it the same as the "M" and the "C"? Or any other ideas you might have. But then we should be just about there!