Okay so this, the original colouring is definitely the way we will go. The original Upnorth logo has white break lines separating the 3 objects which form the brand object (insect thing). Apply to this.
Also can we try another variation of making the 3 oval objects firm an open flower or something environmentally representative. I still like this version just not sure if the logo is quite there I.e. What is it? Hope this helps ?