Nibiru, I like #28 and #23. You have captured all three important elements: Metro Elevator, Tall buildings, And Susan G. Komen. You also captured the "Ride The Pink Elevator" concept so thank you for taking the time to look at the information. One idea I have as is follows: I envision a cartoon character (kind of a superhero) riding on top of one of our Susan G. Komen pink construction elevators up the side of a building on the elevator tower. A scene with lots of tall buildings around it, our construction elevator on a building in the middle of other buildings. I imagine this cartoon character (a construction worker) wearing a pink hard had with the Metro Elevator logo on the hard hat, and the Susan G. Komen Ribbon on his chest. The caption beneath it would be "Ride The Pink Elevator for Susan G. Komen."
Since I am not a cartoon illustrator, I think if you want this contest is the most successful one, kindly make your comment and direction to the public so everyone is free to use the concept. The best will win. I'm okay with that.
Thank you for your response. I still very much like your first designs. I would encourage you to look at the pictures of the construction elevator I included with the original requests for design and perhaps consider modifying your designs slightly. I will do as you suggested with regards to illustrations and see what happens there as well, but I do like your designs.