okay no feedback yet on outlined versions but final Comment for the two designs....can we make sure they are to the same scale? I am thinking this one looks slightly smaller and I don't want that to affect voting by the membership - or maybe it is an optical illusion?
OK...here's version of this without any blue outline for the embroidery...#185.
I hope you like it!?
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
We will need a version of this without any blue outline for the embroidery. Stick has white shading, hair and outlines have all been approved by the committee, just working on the blue outline for on the white jersey
this one has slightly thicker red and yellow...my impression was that in the previous one red seemed a bit thinner, because of the yellow increasement.
Final changes on this one: Committee prefers to have the white shading detail on the stick and the thinner yellow outline around the hair. Could we add the navy outline and thicken the yellow around the disc, if required, as in #175? But not have if go around the hair? Basically, the hair would be on top of the outlined disc so you wouldn't see that? Thank you!
Hi Bob, sorry for the delay. In the end, the final version of this design we would like has the white shading detail on the stick (which in this one is yellow) and the thicker yellow line around the border. There may be one like that already but I am afraid I was unable to find one with all of those elements. Thank you again!
Inner shadow removed and outline changed to red (I can reverse it if needed).
This is one option, where I left out blue outline - to be honest I don't see the need for it when red and yellow outline are this thick.
Yes...it gets busy with the three layers of outlines doesn't it? I had feedback on embroidery with regards to the internal shadow effect that is there from the original 3D lettering I believe. How would you suggest we clean up the borders and the lettering to simplify things a bit??
Hi Bob, would I be able to see this one with the yellow outline thickened to match the red, and a navy outline around it all? I would like to show the committee how much more it would stand out on the white with a navy outline. Just this one version is fine....going to look at the oval design on white next. Thank you!
I actually manage the website for our association. I was wondering if you would be interested in possibly working with me on some images for the website in the future, outside of the logo contest. Just wanted to put it out there.
I have asked the committee for final comments. Thank you, again.
Oh they look so nice! I hate to keep making any changes but could the stick just be yellow where you just removed that line? I apologize as I didn't notice it was white there before. Last thing I promise!
Question, can other designers see our cummunication or is it private do you know?
We'd like to keep the yellow outline on these letters but drop the 3D effect as in the other design, and remove the line on the stick as per the other design. Thanks!
Hi, new feedback from tonight's meeting...
Can we see the hair the same as that from #154 on all 6 of the logos?
We'd also like to drop the 3D lettering by eliminating the blocks on the bottom, making this solid Navy.
Finally, please remove the line on the stick making it 3D....I will circle...on all 6 logos. Make Sense?
I believe this will be the final changes, as long as all 6 logos have the correct pantones as 159 and 160 now do. Love them all! Thank you!
Really loving your latest entries! Another meeting tonight so might not have feedback until then. We are at the point where we need to make sure all the colours match the pantone colours provided - they look like they do but we don't want to get into adding colours as 3/4 is pricey for merchandise as it is. We will be in touch! Thank you
Hello and thank you for your great feedback.
Here are all the options you and your team requested on both background options.
Again, anything can be adjusted.
This helmet look really awesome! I love the red one like my daughter's personally BUT the committee voted for the blue! Could we see this version with a similar shoulder drop as I asked for in #144 please?
White lettering was also the vote although I'd love to see version with flaming letters, too.
Just wanted to say I appreciate your patience with all of us volunteers!
Finally, I am going to circle the white area below the metro East....could we make this navy, please?
Again, versions on both the blue background and the white would be appreciated.
Okay, we are on the final stretch! Could you show us this logo with the helmet from #151? You really nailed it as I thought you would!
Can you drop the line on the left shoulder so that the corner (top of the shoulder) sits at about eye height? I will try to draw an arrow or circle where I mean.
Last thing would be to see it on the blue background and on the white background. Thank you so much!
No problem at all! I love to draw but getting helmets to look right is really tough so I hope the actual picture helps! You are very talented so I have complete faith we will get there!
The gloved hands (with the thumb) and stick look great! Meeting tonight with more discussion coming about the helmet. I think the groove was not quite the right description. I will attach a photo of an actual hockey helmet so you can see the line you would see on the top of the helmet. Hope that helps!
No problem about the changes,
could you please just mark the place on the logo regarding this:
"Lengthen the stick below the hand by the width of the glove? And add a thumb where the hand would be gripping the stick?"
as I'm not quite sure which part does this refer to (just below the hand or...)
Thank you for you great comments and excellent guiding through this process.
Kind regards,
Bob.
The file is called helmet shape and can be applied to the two ranked designs. I thought it would be easier for you to 'see' it. The new committee members were quite drawn to both.
I am going to upload a photo with a suggested change to the helmet shape....I will comment when I have that uploaded. This would need a slight adjustment in this design and #120. Thank you!
Hi there, new comments coming in from the committee tonight....
Could we see this without the cage, please?
Lengthen the stick below the hand by the width of the glove? And add a thumb where the hand would be gripping the stick?
The committee members we added into the process tonight were really impressed with your designs! Thank you!
Really like the colouring on this but it ended up being a little too much emphasis on the chest area which we'd like to have a little more unisex. The hair will emphasize the female component of our brand without the female body. Can we make the face like the old logo, please? Simliar to our comments on the other logo. Thanks!
Looks great! Couple of little changes....
Could we make the facial features a more like our origianl logo? No nose or mouth, white eyes shaped like the original please? Thank you!
Hello!
Here are options with new jersey color...#110, #111, #112.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
Hello!
Here are the changes you requested...#108, #109....eliminate the map of nova scotia, and also the word Female Hockey Association...the hair a bit more colorful, like it is flames.
Thanks again!
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
are you able to eliminate the map of nova scotia, and also the word Female Hockey Association. this would be for all 3. And make the hair a bit more colorful, like it is flames. Thanks
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adjustments regarding colors and facial and helmet elements to have slight resemblance to your previous logo, but still to be less abstract and more girly / but not cheeky.
Let me know what you think.
Oval adjustments coming soon.
I forgot to mention that we prefer this layout for the text, the oval/circular design as opposed to the 'shield' style of the newer ones you submitted. The way the Inferno wraps around is very sharp. We would need the lettering to be either solid colour or a red/yellow combo in a flame design as the fade looks really cool but would add cost for embroidery work. Is that possible? Thank you!
Again, can we add red/yellow striping on jersey sleeves, remove the NS outline, play with the overall outline being red/blue/yellow or yellow/red/blue etc instead of the navy and white.
Is there a more realistic- looking hockey helmet we could see with a face shield that would hide more of the facial features? Can we lose the 'lipstick' look of the lips ?
Can we try removing the NS outline and increasing the font of the Metro East?
Can we make the outline red/yellow/blue?
Same comment for all logos about the outline and the sleeve colouring has come from the committee.
Hi, I have more feedback for you. The committee is asking to see striping added to the arms of the jerseys like that on the sleeves of our existing jerseys. There is a picture attached showing both the front and back, and the sleeves. Thank you!
Hello!
Here are new options #65, #66, #67, #68, #69, #70.
Thanks again!
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
HI, hoping to have more specific feedback for you today after a meeting but generally, your design is attracting attention. I'd love to see variations on the player - something more graphic if you could. The overall shape, lettering layout looks great!
Hello!
Thanks for the comment!
Here are the changes you requested... #14, #15.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
HI! This won't be an annual logo so the 2021 should come out. I can see how that works well for using the spsce around the NS, though.
We have a committee that will review entries tomorrow or Friday evening for more feedback but maybe some colour in the player, or flaming hair? That's all I can suggest for now.
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If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
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Here, I left out that blue shadow that made 3D effect on the letters and left yellow outline (again, can be reversed to red if needed).
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I'm interested in working with you on the images for the website.
We can talk more once the contest is over.
Thank you for the offer.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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I have asked the committee for final comments. Thank you, again.
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I'll upload soon.
..and no, other designers can't see our communication before the end of the contest. Only then all comments become public.
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Let me know if I understood them correctly.
As always and other adjustment is possible.
Thank you!
Kind regards,
Bob.
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Can we see the hair the same as that from #154 on all 6 of the logos?
We'd also like to drop the 3D lettering by eliminating the blocks on the bottom, making this solid Navy.
Finally, please remove the line on the stick making it 3D....I will circle...on all 6 logos. Make Sense?
I believe this will be the final changes, as long as all 6 logos have the correct pantones as 159 and 160 now do. Love them all! Thank you!
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Here are all the options you and your team requested on both background options.
Again, anything can be adjusted.
Let me know.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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White lettering was also the vote although I'd love to see version with flaming letters, too.
Just wanted to say I appreciate your patience with all of us volunteers!
Finally, I am going to circle the white area below the metro East....could we make this navy, please?
Again, versions on both the blue background and the white would be appreciated.
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Can you drop the line on the left shoulder so that the corner (top of the shoulder) sits at about eye height? I will try to draw an arrow or circle where I mean.
Last thing would be to see it on the blue background and on the white background. Thank you so much!
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three versions from less detailed to this one.
Let me know what you think.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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My bad, I thought you wanted some hair, like a bit of a flame to come out of the top.
I'll adjust soon and upload.
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Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
Oval coming soon.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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could you please just mark the place on the logo regarding this:
"Lengthen the stick below the hand by the width of the glove? And add a thumb where the hand would be gripping the stick?"
as I'm not quite sure which part does this refer to (just below the hand or...)
Thank you for you great comments and excellent guiding through this process.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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And a version with all those changes but a plain white INFERNO? Thank you!
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Could we see this without the cage, please?
Lengthen the stick below the hand by the width of the glove? And add a thumb where the hand would be gripping the stick?
The committee members we added into the process tonight were really impressed with your designs! Thank you!
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If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
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Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
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Could we make the facial features a more like our origianl logo? No nose or mouth, white eyes shaped like the original please? Thank you!
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Here are options with new jersey color...#110, #111, #112.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
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Here are the changes you requested...#108, #109....eliminate the map of nova scotia, and also the word Female Hockey Association...the hair a bit more colorful, like it is flames.
Thanks again!
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
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Let me know if you have any suggestions.
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options with bigger metro east
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Let me know what you think.
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Kind regards,
Bob.
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adjustments regarding colors and facial and helmet elements to have slight resemblance to your previous logo, but still to be less abstract and more girly / but not cheeky.
Let me know what you think.
Oval adjustments coming soon.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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Can we try removing the NS outline and increasing the font of the Metro East?
Can we make the outline red/yellow/blue?
Same comment for all logos about the outline and the sleeve colouring has come from the committee.
We are really liking your work!
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Here are new options #65, #66, #67, #68, #69, #70.
Thanks again!
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
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More detailed girl.
Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
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Thanks for the comment!
Here are the changes you requested... #14, #15.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
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We have a committee that will review entries tomorrow or Friday evening for more feedback but maybe some colour in the player, or flaming hair? That's all I can suggest for now.
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Here are first options #7, #8.
Any feedback is welcome!
Best regards,
Bob.