Mermane HaircareLogo Design Contest

Revision of #151
Flopped the position of the comb and the name.

Revision of #150

Entire mermaid comb is reduced again by 10%

Sure!

LOVE the width on this comb, definitely feels more balanced.

going to ask that we shrink the illustration down just a little more for comparison and then can i also see a separate revision of that one with the illustration placed under the brand name, thanks so much!

Comb narrowed by 15%

Let me know if you want it narrowed even more. Thx!

Comb narrowed by 10%

Sure. By narrowing, I assume you mean from top to bottom, and not side to side?

BTW - I haven't had a chance to comment on this one. This entry has the mermaid comb reduced by 15%, while the entry #147 has it reduced by 10%.

Here you are - Revision of #144 -

Made the bottom line of the "body" mirror the top line, so the body looks symmetrical
Reduced the size of the mermaid comb by 10%
Kept the text/name the same size

Let me know if this is enough of a reduction. Thx!

Awesome! Can i see what it would look like with the actual comb portion more narrow?

The majority of the feedback I’m getting is that the image overpowers the name, so making it smaller should help, you’re awesome thank you for being so pleasant to work with!

With that can we make the overall image smaller and keep the name as is

Sure - no problem!

Can we make the bottom curve come in slightly so that it’s uniform with the top curve? I noticed that the lower part of the “body” comes out a bit farther than the top curve, it’s a very slight difference

Thank you! Glad you like it!

Just going to run it by a few people and get some feedback from fresh eyes, to see if there are any final tweaks we need. Other than that it’s perfect!

This is stunning, i have nothing else to say!
Couldn’t be happier

Here you are! All lines the same thickness (2 point lines).
Thanks for your patience!

No worries, have fun!

Of course! I will do that later this evening when I get back to my computer.
Birthday dinner for my husband at our cousin's house. Thx!

Amazing, thank you!

Can i see how the outlines would look thickened on the combs teeth as well? I’d like every line to be the same thickness

Revision of #136

Modified the tail/fin
Brought the letters closer together
Made the comb's teeth skinnier
Thickened the outlines overall, except for the comb's teeth

Let me know what else you'd like changed.

Will make the changes. Thanks for the feedback!

I love it but I’ve gotten some feedback that it’s beautiful but the tail fin looks a little more like a fish than a mermaid so i think it’s best to go with the “mono tail” look

Just uploaded reference pictures for the shape of the tail fin

thank you! can the outline of the comb section be a little skinnier so its less thick of a border around the teeth and the actual teeth be slightly thinner as well.

id also like the whole illustration to have slightly bolder lines so it stands out a little more on the packaging, (not super thick and bold just a little please) and can we maybe shrink down the name just the littlest bit so there is less space between each letter?

(thank you for working with me im not the best at explaining the changes!)

Same as #136, except extended the length of the comb by adding another tooth.
Let me know what else you'd like to see. Thanks for the feedback!

Evened the comb and made the name all caps, on one line.

Great! I'll make the changes and resubmit. Thanks!

i would also like the name to be all capital letters in one line under the illustration please

this looks awesome! the actual tail looks amazing, can we make the comb section more uniform? id like the teeth to all be even

Hi,
Here's my version of the requested mermaid comb. Please let me know if I should change anything. Thanks!

I did upload a couple more reference pics, hope that helps! Ideally I’d like to keep it as simple as possible not too many scales or lines in the tail because I’m planning to release a real comb to sell that is the real life version of this logo!

Ok, thanks, I’ll do that.

Yes but I’d still like it to have clean lines, I’m terrible at describing these things, apologies!

You want the comb to look loose and sketchy/doodly, correct?

This is really pretty! Thank you for submitting, would you be willing to recreate the comb with the mermaid tail from my uploads? I’m leaning toward that design and think you would do an amazing job !

Slight modification of #116 -
I made the lines of the mermaid thick and thin instead of uniform.

Hi,
Please let me know if you'd like revisions. I'd be happy to make the changes. Thanks in advance for your feedback!
Pam