I prefer the tagline to be on the right, because it can offset the position of the mandala so that the mandala is in the middle of the design. the design I built was inspired by a short design.
I'm sorry I'm late, I've sent you some mandalas please check, and tell me which design is closest to what you are looking for, then we play with colors
The top layer (TL) has 8 pedals. Then the background layer (BL) has 8 pedals, but you can only see the tip of the BL. So can you try different combinations of colors?
TL = Blue gradient
BL = Green
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TL = Green Gradient
BL = Blue
Also, please show with Red & Blue colors as well. Thanks!
1. 10 pedals on Mandala. I'm still waiting. U show me 8 & 12, i want to see 10.
2. Change Lines left & right of "Become Immortal" to Blue.
3. The Mandala green is too dark. It should be Blue & Green, but top Green needs to be brighter, like "Become Immortal" green.
4. Can you Make the "I" different? With 3 strokes. horizontal top, vertical middle, horizontal bottom.
5. Also show us "I" with dot: "i"
6. Show 1-5 with Red & Blue.
We don't want the slogan on the right anymore. We're finished with that idea. We're going to keep the slogan on the bottom. So can you re-submit with the slogan on the bottom only. Now in the future. Thanks!
1. I like 8 pedals, but i'd also like to see 10 pedals.
2. Can you use the E from #162 but keep the red color inside the E. And show us one with the red on the outside of the E with the blue inside.
3. Can you add a drop shadow behind the "Become Immortal" & behind the lines on the left and right, but make the shadow color the main blue. I'm afraid this part is hard to read at a distance.
4. Please show us everything above in with the colors from #206 as well. We're still trying to decide which colors we like more. We love them both.
1. Show us this on a white background.
2. Change the colors to be the choices from #148
3. Change the Tagline to "Become Immortal"
4. Change the font of the Tagline to the one from #198
5. Move the tagline to the bottom, and show it on the right as well (we want to see both).
Also show us a composition with the mandala as a center logo by itself, above both the name and the slogan, which should be centered beneath the mandala
Also, can you add the slogan too please in a complimentary font. Add it on the right side separated by a vertical bar between the name and the slogan. The slogan should also have a line line break as follows
Can you show us a whole huge different list of colors. Warm colors, cool colors, etc. Reds, oranges, blues, greens, yellows, dark background, white backgrounds. You should choose 1 primary color, and 1 accenting color. Preferably the primary/secondary colors is going to be "cooler/warmer" combination. Thanks.
Make the first two letters ascending heights. Make the E shorter than the second M tho, to denote growth as well as to accentuate how the word is pronounced.
I like the flowers & the skull, but we're trying to avoid any symbolism of death completely. The style/look & feel is pretty decent. However the font's look like something i could find in Word. They need to be much more stylized & unique. This feels very generic/elementary. We need something not easily reproduce-able.
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2. Double letter spacing for "Become Immortal"
Example:
(before) BECOME
(after) B E C O M E
3. Increase space between Bar & letters on left & right.
Example
(before) Memori | Become
(after) Memori | B E C O M E
Please show 1-3 with Gold/Black also
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Can you show us again with Mandala from #220 but with Gold color? Thanks.
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But i like the "Become Immortal" on bottom in White Background.
Can you show us "Become Immortal" on right like #194?
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Grey: rgb(84, 84, 84).
And move the "Become Immortal" to the right like you had in #214?
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I want to see...
Also, can you show 3 color styles? with changes from above
1. Blue/Green like #220 | background = rgb(0, 0, 0)
2. Blue/Red like #221 | background = rgb(0, 0, 0) & White background
3. Blue/Orange from #194 (with white background)
4. Blue: rgb(23, 51, 186) / Pink: Rgb(253, 38, 129) | background = rgb(0, 0, 0)
5. Black: rgb(48, 48, 46) / Gold: Gold: rgb(237, 169, 35) | background = rgb(0, 0, 0)
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5. Black: rgb(48, 48, 46) / Gold: Gold: rgb(237, 169, 35)
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1. Blue/Green like #220
2. Blue/Red like #221
3. Blue/Orange from #194 (with white background)
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But i'd like to try different versions now of Mandala as well.
So can you maybe shape the mandala in layers?
Here's image that maybe helps:
https://img.freepik.com/free-vector/luxury-mandala-background_23-2148424829.jpg?size=626&ext=jpg
The top layer (TL) has 8 pedals. Then the background layer (BL) has 8 pedals, but you can only see the tip of the BL. So can you try different combinations of colors?
TL = Blue gradient
BL = Green
&&
TL = Green Gradient
BL = Blue
Also, please show with Red & Blue colors as well. Thanks!
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Can you also try a big I? But an "i" that looks like the "I" from "Immortal" with the Hat and the Foot; (Horizontal strokes on top & bottom)
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2. Change Lines left & right of "Become Immortal" to Blue.
3. The Mandala green is too dark. It should be Blue & Green, but top Green needs to be brighter, like "Become Immortal" green.
4. Can you Make the "I" different? With 3 strokes. horizontal top, vertical middle, horizontal bottom.
5. Also show us "I" with dot: "i"
6. Show 1-5 with Red & Blue.
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1. I like 8 pedals, but i'd also like to see 10 pedals.
2. Can you use the E from #162 but keep the red color inside the E. And show us one with the red on the outside of the E with the blue inside.
3. Can you add a drop shadow behind the "Become Immortal" & behind the lines on the left and right, but make the shadow color the main blue. I'm afraid this part is hard to read at a distance.
4. Please show us everything above in with the colors from #206 as well. We're still trying to decide which colors we like more. We love them both.
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2. Change the colors to be the choices from #148
3. Change the Tagline to "Become Immortal"
4. Change the font of the Tagline to the one from #198
5. Move the tagline to the bottom, and show it on the right as well (we want to see both).
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