memoriLogo Design Contest

what do you mean like this?

No you moved the line. The line is fine before. When i drew line, i meant that's where the blur should start.

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Let’s try and blur everything below the line i drew. you’re really close.

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Change the slogan to "You live so we remember" And split it as follows:

"You live so" <feet> "we remember"

Yeah that's better. But the outside line on on the gray needs to completely fade into the white. I can still see the line

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Let's try changing the foot color to gray. To make it look like a real shadow. Then fade the gray, like you're fading the blue, but make the gray blend all the way into the white background.

Hmmm. Yeah that's what i wanted to see.

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Ok, so let's play with the foot shadow (Everything below the line). Let's make the darker blue closer to the line, and then the darker blue fades to a lighter blue towards the toes.

Yes!

Also, let's try to reverse the blue gradient. So instead of the light blue coming from the center, let's make the left and right sides, the lighter blue, and the middle M the darker blue.

I think that's better. But why does the "e" look like it's from a different font than the other letters?

what do you mean like this?

Crisp, sharp, obvious transition.

Yes, almost. But the transition from light blue, to dark blue, needs to be a solid fine line. Not a transition.

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Lets see if we can make legs of the M a bit straighter on the outside. I’m afraid the M we’re trying to make, may not look like an m.

Also, remove the comma after “You Live”

The final effect should look like the feet are on the X axis, but the M is on the Y axis.

Ok, let’s try to make the illusion of a 3D plane by increasing the shadow’s where i drew the line. So don’t change anything about the shading/gradient above the line. But at the line and below, make a hard shadow, with a medium blue, then make the blue get darker down the foot, but still blue, just darker blue. Does it make sense?

You're amazing at following directions.

However, i don't know if i like this. I kind do. I'm letting it have a chance to grow on me.

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Change “you live we remember” to the green from the leaf

Lets make footprint wider, and move the leaves agove the “i”

Make the lines with the “M”and the footprint, the same thickness please.

Instead of the foot connecting to the "e" (left) and the "o" (right), connect the foot completely to the 3 legs of the "m". You may need to stretch the foot near the toes to be wider. It should look like a 3D effect where the feet are almost like shadows of the M.

I really like the blue foot by itself.

Let's try something where the blue M is sitting on top of the middle "M". The only green leaf we see is on top of the "i".

The bottom black foot can be removed.

I love the gradient you're working with here.

I like this a lot actually. Let's try the following changes.

1. Drop the leave, and instead put 1 leaf at the top of the i as the dot.
2. Make the 3 legs of the M feed into the foot print.
3. Change the gradient of the letters from dark green (same green in the footprint outline to the blue we already have.
4. Can you sharpen the bottom corners of some of the letters so they're not all super round?
5. See if you can even out "you live we remember" right now they're different sizes.

Btw, you're also welcome to try a different logo theme: We really like, a "message in a bottle" theme/idea. As well as some type of time capsule/treasure box idea.

This is very interesting! I really like your artistic abilities.

1. Get rid of black. Change the black to a gradient blue/green color.
2. Please try a single foot print, rotated 90 degrees, and sits under neath the word "memori", and then plants are growing out of that footprint into the word "memori".
3. Also, can you change the shape of the foot a bit? connect the big toe to the main foot shape, but leave the other 4 toes like they are (unconnected). Also, define the heal a little bit more.

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I really like your composition and styling. But i hate the blue & green logo. It looks like an octopus. Can you do an iteration of a footprint & a plant combined together in some way? Thanks

I like the logo colors & composition, but the blue part looks like a trident, which feels very odd and out of place. Also, the bottom part of the "memori" should be rounded out.

Could you maybe do something with a footprint? stylized. I have this idea of a footprint in the ground, with a plant growing out of it. Maybe you can combine those two symbols together, or have the two symbols somewhere in the logo. For example the "i" at the end be a plant sprout somehow.